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Five People Who Knew it Before Alicia

Jun 04, 2011 20:56

Title: Five People Who Knew it Before Alicia
Author: variousflumps
Pairing: Alicia/Kalinda
Spoilers: Up to 2x23
Rating: PG
Summary: It's obvious to everyone but her.

Author's note: Written for the excellent Good Wife Fixathon.

( Owen - He has no idea why Alicia still talks to her, and when he meets her for the first time he has no idea why they even became friends in the first place. She’s rude, uninterested, aloof, arrogant and dull. She has the social skills of a pot plant. He thinks she’s awful. )

rating:pg, fanfiction, alicia/kalinda

Comments 4

demoka June 5 2011, 10:55:42 UTC

Wee---llll Alicia, Courtney IS your assistant even if it weren't for that particular night! XP Awwwww!

*pets Cary* Weren't you sweet? Mm, I like that you had Will muse about Kalinda. And get worried that she said "please". This line was great to end his part: You’re not married to Kalinda, he thinks. Poor guy!

I got a a toothache from this line:
Kalinda lights up. Alicia watches, thinks “I did that.” Eee!

Thanks for sharing!

sweetjamielee June 5 2011, 16:50:48 UTC

Oooh I like it! I love the thought that all these people are like US, seeing all this stuff go down between these two and going, *eyebrow*.

Enjoyed your take on Owen... I go back and forth between thinking he'd be DELIGHTED by Kalinda, and thinking he'd be all "whotf is this person and why are you nice to her." Liked his bemusement here.

CARY. Sweet to see him being a good friend to K here, despite... well, despite.:) I want him to be this person. It makes me warm inside.

Sorry, Will and Sophia, bbs. It's just... not you. It can't be. It will forever be about Kalinda and Alicia's EPIC TRAGIC LOVE. Kalinda begging Will to PLEASE, not take away this one last thread she has tying her to Alicia... gah. MY HEART.

That kiss made me all kinds of glowy. Gah, reading about them being happy and hopeful is just... it wins. It wins so hard.

Lovely job, Flump! It's awesome to see you being so fic-productive here.:)

upriserseven June 7 2011, 22:58:12 UTC

"Can I have another kiss?” THIS WAS SO WONDERFULLY ADORABLE.

I love this whole thing. Amazing.

rhyfeddu June 18 2011, 01:03:50 UTC

Aw, man. You totally surprised me that it was the Will and Cary ones that both hurt and touched my heart the most. Gads.

Fantastic all around. And you gave us a happy ending. :)

(I do canon wonder what Owen's gaydar will make of our Ms. Sharma)