Comments | variousflumps: Fic: Incidentally (Alicia/Kalinda, R)

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Fic: Incidentally (Alicia/Kalinda, R)

Feb 10, 2013 19:10

Title: Incidentally
Author: variousflumps
Pairing: Alicia/Kalinda
Rating: R
Summary: That night. In the hotel room. You know the one.

( Finally satisfied with the layout of the table, Alicia gets into bed. The left-hand side of the bed. And then she reaches out and folds down the blankets on the right. )

fanfiction, alicia/kalinda, rating:r

Comments 5

zinnia_rose February 11 2013, 06:05:05 UTC

WOW. Woooooooooow. Damn. I, uh, think I need a cold shower now.

This is AMAZING and is most definitely my new canon for them. IT TOTALLY HAPPENED. I cannot even tell you how much glee the thought of Kalinda having to poke through Alicia's underwear drawer gives me.

She’s in Alicia’s bed, talking about her silk underwear. “I..I thought that they were...professional.”

LOL, perfection. Poor Kalinda (except not really :p)! I do love it when she gets all flustered. The whole second-drawer conversation is my new favorite thing EVAR.

“You’re not that innocent.”

APPARENTLY NOT. AND I LOVE IT.

She’s smiling sexily. She’s clearly aware of the effect she has on her, of the depth of the erotic power that she has at her command. In most of her fantasies, Alicia’s a little nervous the first time, shy. Even submissive. Now she’s wondering why.UNF, I think you've officially killed me. In the best possible way. Take!Charge Alicia is the hottest thing ever ( ... )

variousflumps February 12 2013, 20:30:12 UTC

Thanks for such a great comment! IT DID INDEED TOTALLY HAPPEN. I HAS DECIDED. I mean, someone had to be going through drawers, right?

There is part of me that thinks Kalinda would actually have some kind of short circuit if she were ever presented with Take!Charge Alicia in a sexytime situation. The epic love would be enough for her to cope with, but then to find Alicia going all dominant on her...well. Results would be...dramatic.

schwarmerei1 February 11 2013, 11:31:37 UTC

You need praising at AO3 AND here! Wheeeeee!

BTW, um, I'm very pleased that we agree about who has which side of the bed. It's actually important in my head that it is that way.

And seriously, hard core props on the dialogue here. I'm finding it very hard to write them getting down with each other. This was convincing AND hot as hell.

variousflumps February 12 2013, 20:34:54 UTC

Wahay, two comments for the price of one! I haven't ever posted at AO3 before but there have been such great A/K fics there recently that I wanted to expose myself to as many Kalicia fans as possible. Um. So to speak.

The bed thing is important *nods*. There are *angles* to consider. And left-handedness. And Nine Hours.

Ooh, sounds like there is schwarmerei fic on the way, y/y? Looking forward to it!

schwarmerei1 February 13 2013, 01:25:07 UTC

There's multiple fics coming... I just need to stop starting new ones and finish the WIPs!!! (Kind of angry at myself about it actually.)

The bed thing: I find it really convenient that Kalicia have a rightie/leftie thing going. >:D