Between Now and Five Minutes (1/1)

[varjaks]

Title: Between Now and Five Minutes (1/1)
Characters: Peter Pan, Amelia Pond. Reference to the Eleventh Doctor and Wendy Darling
Genre: Friendship, Humor, General
Disclaimer: Sadly, I don't own these characters.
Summary: As Amelia Pond waits for the Doctor to come back for her after "five minutes," she wakes up to find a boy clothed in leaves flying

Comments

[eatingthepeach]

[eatingthepeach]

YES I HAVE BEEN STALKING THIS PAGE WAITING FOR YOU TO POST THIS SO I COULD BASK IN ITS GLORY AND READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN. SO WHAT.

[varjaks]

ASDFGHJKL; REMEMBER HOW I SAID I FLAIL TO MYSELF SOMETIMES WHEN WE TALK. YEAH I LOOK LIKE A FLAMINGO ON RITALIN RN

[eatingthepeach]

HAHAHA ♥

[eatingthepeach]

OKAY THINGS I THOUGHT AS I READ THIS:

I love how sassy Amelia is at the beginning! A strange boy is in her room, she should be scared, but she's so protective of her Doctor things she immediately jumps into interrogating mode.

And you have Peter's cockiness down PERFECTLY. "I DON'T LIKE DOLLS!" ♥

He was beginning to wonder if anything could surprise Amelia Pond. Again, characterization is perfecttttt! Amelia is so caught up with the world of the Doctor that nothing fazes her, and Peter is cocky enough to challenge that, and he's intrigued by her calmness.

"What about the Doctor?"
"Who?"

AT THIS POINT I WAS BEYOND FLAILINGGGGGGG. SO SO PERFECT.

Because no one knew as well as Peter that little girls dressed in silly nighties with a love for adventure and stories only come once in a lifetime.

AND AT THIS POINT I WAS DEAD.

[varjaks]

JUST MORE FLAILING. SRSLY AMY YOU SPOIL ME ROTTEN. I can't ephasize how all of this wouldn't have happened if you didn't make that Peter x Amy graphic in the first place. It pretty much wrote itself there.

I honestly didn't intend to have that little angsty line about little girls in silly nighties but oh God it's impossible not to be bitter about the ending Wendy and Peter had.

A little off topic but have you seen the alternative ending for Peter Pan?! I PRETTY MUCH BAWLED ALL OVER AGAIN. SORRY JANE YOU'RE CUTE BUT NO. GIVE ME WENDY/PETER.

[eatingthepeach]

No, no, no, I LOVED THAT LINE. You can't mention Peter without mentioning Wendy ♥

ON AND UGHHHH. I remember watching it once on the dvd and THANKING GOD THAT THEY DIDN'T CHOOSE IT. I never want to see him ~forgetting Wendy and moving on to her daughter~ I mean yes I know that's the essence of Peter Pan, whatever, BUT DNW DNW!! Same with Disney's fucking Return to Neverland. PUT IT BACK ON THE SHELF.

[varjaks]

AGREED, THANK GOD. It was just heartbreaking to see him move onto Jane so quickly like what happened between him and Wendy was so easy to get over. AND SERIOUSLY IN FRONT OF WENDY WHAT?

But ugghhh the part when he realizes that she's grown up and he's in denial? RIP MY HEART OUT WHY DON'T YOU? I just wanted to rewind and throw a calendar and a watch at Peter to help him keep track of the days so he would come back for her. Or just make Wendy go with Peter just as he's about to fly off ;_____________;

[eatingthepeach]

SERIOUSLY SAM. I CAN'T GET OVER THIS PIECE. THIS IS NOW MY PERSONAL CANON.

[varjaks]

NGL THESE TWO ARE SLOWLY STARTING TO EDGE OUT ANDREW/KAREN FOR ME. NOW EVERY TIME THE MOFF COMPARES AMY TO WENDY I WON'T BE ABLE TO CONTROL MYSELF.

[varjaks]

I did make a sort of follow up to this over here in tumblr if you're interested

[varjaks]

I'm really glad you like it, Cordelia :)