LJ Idol 9, Week 2: The Missing Stair

Mar 24, 2014 18:17

Janny’s nose had been stuck in her book since she sat down in the bus to go home. Her parents had installed a keypad lock, so instead of fumbling for keys at the front door, Janny simply transferred her book from right hand to left, without so much as glancing up, so she could punch in the combination, and switched hands again to take off her ( Read more... )

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kecharasmoon March 24 2014, 23:47:29 UTC
Dear Tel,

Please to be opening a portal or some such transportation module for me on my stairs.

Sincerely,

Another wannabe spellcaster

:D

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vaudy March 26 2014, 19:21:38 UTC
Me too! :) Thanks for reading!

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witches March 25 2014, 11:36:58 UTC
I LOVE this :D

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vaudy March 26 2014, 19:21:53 UTC
Thanks so much!

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veronica_rich March 26 2014, 12:27:58 UTC
Fun! I like Tel. "I'll show THEM." *mutter grumble*

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vaudy March 26 2014, 19:22:46 UTC
He's a crafty little guy. I have a feeling he's one of those characters that's not gonna leave me alone.

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i_will_not_say March 26 2014, 16:55:45 UTC
I love how Janny was like "why would I want to go home?" Often in stories like this, the transported character is all about getting home, so the difference was refreshing. ^_^

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vaudy March 26 2014, 19:24:56 UTC
Thanks, I thought it would be an interesting angle to explore. I think I'll be working with this more, even if it's not in Idol.

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baxaphobia March 26 2014, 18:10:17 UTC
How about creating a portal for me to escape work? Grins. Nicely done.

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vaudy March 26 2014, 19:23:37 UTC
I'll get in touch with Tel and see if he's up for it, lol. Thanks!

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