Oh, this was gorgeous! At first I did think it was from from Sirius' POV with this line: "It was only due to pure luck and the persistence of Dumbledore that he was among the living."
But then as the story progressed I was certain it was Severus, but I was right the first time!
It's true, they really are quite similar, depending on how you look at it.
Thanks you for the link, I'm going to check it out! I'm really happy that it worked (The question of the POV), because it's hard to tell when you're the one writing it :)
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(and that sounded just a bit too whorish, I think...;)
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But then as the story progressed I was certain it was Severus, but I was right the first time!
It's true, they really are quite similar, depending on how you look at it.
Oh, and I browsed through some of your earlier posts and saw one looking for a comm for exchanging plot bunnies. It isn't exactly what you are looking for but this: http://www.twilightsorcery.net/hp/cookie_request_list.php
kind of allows for the same thing.
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I like your story a lot.
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