Comments | vaznetti: drabble meme: John and River

vaznetti

drabble meme: John and River

Oct 22, 2007 00:30

cidercupakes asked for John and River; she got an outtake from Blessings. Let's say it's set between Xu Landing and Xinwuwei Port.

( a break-in, with the promise of cake )

fanfic:firefly, fanfic:spn, fanfic:crossover, blessings_against_thunder

Comments 16

cofax7 October 22 2007, 03:47:43 UTC

"Oh." She sounds sad to hear it.

Oh, perfect.

vaznetti October 22 2007, 16:09:15 UTC

Thank you!

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vaznetti October 22 2007, 16:14:25 UTC

Thank you!

Writing River's conversations is hard, because she's having both -- the not-said and the said. But she's a little more gentle, here.

musesfool October 22 2007, 04:08:30 UTC

Oh, perfect.

vaznetti October 22 2007, 16:14:44 UTC

Thank you!

saberivojo October 22 2007, 10:29:59 UTC

I like this a lot. River and John. Their voices are so right. Good job.

vaznetti October 22 2007, 23:15:57 UTC

Thank you! Especially for the comment on the voices -- River is hard to get right!

phantomas October 22 2007, 11:17:54 UTC

OH OH! BLESSINGS!!!

:)

This is perfect, John looking up where usually people won't look. Love your River. Love Blessings :)

vaznetti October 22 2007, 23:16:50 UTC

Well, he would check the ceiling, don't you think?

Thank you so much! I feel so bad about how long it's taking me to get my act together and finish this damn story!

phantomas October 24 2007, 23:27:28 UTC

As long as it takes!
I love your big damn story ;)