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My Story about My Friend - Aoi’s Story

Jun 16, 2010 11:37

Tittle              : My Story about My Friend - Aoi’s Story

Chapters       : um… it’s not oneshoot… two shoot maybe…

Author           : veechuu

Genre            : Fluff? Crack maybe.

Warnings       : Bad English. Sissy Aoi.

Rating            : PG13

Pairings         : UruhaxAoi

Synopsis        : Uruha from Aoi point of view.

Comments     : Oh ( Read more... )

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Comments 28

pucchan_17 June 16 2010, 05:50:44 UTC

awwwwww mereka lucu banget~ X3
maap ya baru komen di yg ini, baru baca yg Uruha's POV tadi soale~ *digetok pake mic nya Ruki*

ini masih bersambung kan yayaya? X3
apdetnya jgn lama2 yaa~
I love this~ <3
thanks~! :3

veechuu June 17 2010, 02:34:43 UTC

waaaah~ dibaca jg uruha's pov.a >.< sankyuu y~

masiii~

walah... saya nunggu mood kalo nulis ==' *author ga guna*

doitaaaa~ *hugs*

airockz69 June 16 2010, 08:29:28 UTC

no offense but you better watch for the grammar and typos =/

xichigojam June 16 2010, 08:34:27 UTC

didn't you read the warnings?
and there aren't so many errors at all!~~

airockz69 June 16 2010, 09:26:14 UTC

i did u__u
i'd say "you better" though..>_>

/end

xichigojam June 16 2010, 11:47:18 UTC

haha okay, just checking;>

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xichigojam June 16 2010, 08:33:25 UTC

yeesss:DDD
make a sequel:DDD

veechuu June 17 2010, 02:53:19 UTC

yeaaaah~ I will >.<
thx for reading and everything! I really love you! *kisses*

dianne_djrjys June 16 2010, 14:05:22 UTC

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh *ngakak guling2*

laaaaanjuuuuuuuuuuuutttt XDDDDDDDD

sumpah saya pengen liat aoi naked *plaaak* <

veechuu June 17 2010, 02:56:59 UTC

wakakak seneng bgt lo bisa bikin orang ketawa 8D

pasti! XD

walah! saya jg pengen! pengen bgt malah! *telanjangin aoi*

dianne_djrjys June 17 2010, 09:05:44 UTC

wah eike jg seneng bisa ketawa jeng XDDDD

gw tunggu lanjutannya~ ganbatte~ XD *joget2 memeshikute bareng aoi* XDDD

ayooooo telanjangin aoi~ XDDD *ditabok uru*

veechuu June 18 2010, 04:13:50 UTC

wokeh! ini juga lagi d ketik ^^
tp rada aneh jalan ceritanya =='

AYO! URU MAH GA USAH DIPIKIR! lol

priscilia301 June 16 2010, 15:09:10 UTC

I can't resist the will to comment.

This...series thing is really funny. It really gives me some entertainment when I'm bored :P Ruki sounds like Aoi and Uruha's love advisor XDDD It's really funny how they consult with a guy who's younger than the both of them XD

Oh and that float pool thing was totally random. It sounded like Uru had nothing else to say haha

What made me laugh even more was this:
*float pool tu kolam apung yang kayak di ancol itu lhooo 8D

I was like LOL it's in Indonesian XDD Hello fellow Indonesian!! :) Very sorry I used English because my Indonesian sucks like hell.

veechuu June 17 2010, 03:00:38 UTC

ah! then comment as many as you want! spamming is allowed here! XD

haha, they both are dorks! so if ruki isn't there, there won't be any progress! lol

hehe, float pool is random thing that pop out in my head back then 8D

heeellloooo~ ah! i love met indonesian at lj X3
he? why? are you not from here?

priscilia301 June 20 2010, 13:53:17 UTC

Hahaha no I am from here... I'm pure Indo but four years of going to an international school and having bule + korean friends makes my Indonesian go bad =.=

Well, actually it's not that bad... I still speak Indonesian but I'm more comfortable with English nowadays :P

veechuu June 21 2010, 09:16:10 UTC

aaaahhhh~ i see~
But, i think english can't defeat the fun using slank indonesian XD