Well, it certainly doesn't irritate me! (Her face is already red like a tomato from all the wonderful comments she is getting - and her cheeks are getting tired too, 'cause she's been grinning so much - the joys of life! :D) And I will certainly write a chapter two after all this! :DDD (Hopefully it will be as good as this one...) Thank you for liking it, I'm very glad you did. :D
Heeee! That was adorable! The concept of Tsunade being a yaoi fangirl is priceless. And Iruka's flustered-ness was really cute. You did a very good job for English not being your first language, although it could still use a going-over by a beta reader. If you need a beta, just ask. There's a lot of people, myself included, who would probably be willing.
Thank you so much! To tell you the truth, I was a little scared of messing up too greatly... I know I sometimes translate stuff word for word from hungarian, (Like saying "Seagull!" instead of "That rocks!" - God, looking back, that hurts quite a lot now...) and grammar isn't my strong point either... *Thinks of the half an hour she spent on spell check with lj) Nope, definitely not. v_v" I could always imagine Tsunade as a fan girl, for some odd reason. Glad you think positive of that idea too! :D
Chocolate? Muhaha... (glances at the piles of early easter buns she has)
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And I will certainly write a chapter two after all this! :DDD (Hopefully it will be as good as this one...)
Thank you for liking it, I'm very glad you did. :D
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...Now you have me craving chocolate... -.-;
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To tell you the truth, I was a little scared of messing up too greatly... I know I sometimes translate stuff word for word from hungarian, (Like saying "Seagull!" instead of "That rocks!" - God, looking back, that hurts quite a lot now...) and grammar isn't my strong point either... *Thinks of the half an hour she spent on spell check with lj) Nope, definitely not. v_v"
I could always imagine Tsunade as a fan girl, for some odd reason. Glad you think positive of that idea too! :D
Chocolate? Muhaha... (glances at the piles of early easter buns she has)
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dear gods in heaven....
you're angsting all over the carpet...
That was genius. I'm gonna go angst all over the carpet that there wasn't a part two...
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