Paris to Serbia (Ch 10)

[vegawriters]

Series: Paris to Serbia
Chapter 10: Answers
Author: vegawriters
Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: Jethro/Hollis (this chapter)
Rating: Adult
Timeframe: Early 5th season.
A/N: I’ve always had a problem with the idea that Jenny rose to her position in NCIS so quickly. So this series gives some history not only to Gibbs and Shepard, but also to Jenny’s past and where her

Comments

[alidiabin]

I like how you made the Huntington's disease apparent well before we heard about it. Nice direction for the fic. And the line you chose for the summary was perfect.

[vegawriters]

Thanks. :) This is one of those chapters that had to get posted, even if I'm not totally happy with it. Thanks for reading!!

[ddagent]

Oh this chap was so sad! I feel so sorry for Jenny, bless her. You have such a way with prose, every chapter is a wonder to read! Great stuff :D

[vegawriters]

I'm so glad you like it because I wasn't too thrilled with this chapter and it has such important stuff in it. So yay. Thanks! :)

[on_jennys_terms]

I'm really enjoying reading this along with the stuff from Liz. Paints a very inspiring picture for me.

[vegawriters]

Thank you! :D I can't wait to start writing that second series. ;)

[kew121]

I really liked this chapter--both the Gibbs/Mann parts and Jenny's point of view.

[vegawriters]

Thank you. I did too. And I haven't been able to move on from it. The muses are whispering at me and I have to figure out what they're saying. :)

[kew121]

I like the sound of that :)

[flamingo55]

I love this! I feel so sorry for Jenny - I always wished they'd followed up some on that storyline. And I love the way you wrote Hollis and Gibbs - very true to the characters. I can see how she'd lump Jenny in with the ex-wives - as you said, she's everything but.

Now to catch up on the first few parts!

[vegawriters]

Thanks. This was an odd chapter for me, but it just seemed to fit. We'll see how things go with the next one. :)