i should've added more detail about how Brendon looked and such, but I'm happy that you managed to come up with your own picture. that's how i think he would look too. thank you so much!
The ending was a bit abrupt and left me wanting more - kinda like when you go to the movies and then all of a sudden it's over and you're like, wtf, that's it? what just happened? I really think you could've expanded a bit more and made those last few paragraphs flow better into an ending. That... is pretty much the only con crit I can think of for you, dear. Lovely work; my favorite Christmas standalone this year, I think. =D
I know what you mean! Some movies make me so angry, on edge and wanting so much more. I should have added more, I agree. Love the con-crit. Thank you very much!
ahhhhh! everything about this story was amazing little elf! brendon and pessimistic! ryan those two were life plus i loved pete and keltie as their adorable little supporting character roles! a sequel would be kind of amazing?
thank you so much! i loved pete and keltie too. i loved writing them. a sequel, huh? i don't know. i was thinking a pete/patrick wedding. or maybe tom taking that stick out of his butt and loving keltie ;D
if you have any ideas or wants, let me know! thanks again. (:
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Merry Christmas.
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also, happy new year.
thank you so much!
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thank you so much!
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The ending was a bit abrupt and left me wanting more - kinda like when you go to the movies and then all of a sudden it's over and you're like, wtf, that's it? what just happened? I really think you could've expanded a bit more and made those last few paragraphs flow better into an ending. That... is pretty much the only con crit I can think of for you, dear. Lovely work; my favorite Christmas standalone this year, I think. =D
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Love the con-crit. Thank you very much!
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little elf! brendon and pessimistic! ryan
those two were life
plus i loved pete and keltie as their adorable little supporting character roles!
a sequel would be kind of amazing?
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i loved pete and keltie too. i loved writing them.
a sequel, huh?
i don't know. i was thinking a pete/patrick wedding.
or maybe tom taking that stick out of his butt and loving keltie ;D
if you have any ideas or wants, let me know!
thanks again. (:
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i loved these characters as if they were my own children.
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