in denial...

[vein_melter]

manos me recuerdo solamente a ti te odio, yo ya me voy

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edit dos

[vein_melter]

come to think of it the poem kinda sucks, it doesnt work well backwards, not well thought out, i just like the subject matter i just failed in describing it well

Re: edit dos

[thestuzmuffins]

dont apologize for your work. ever.

i think its quite nice really, im a fan of the word ordering.

[anonymous]

i like the second half more, i dont know why i just like the flow