Where It Was Once

[velfatish]

Title: Where It was Once
Rating: g
Pairing(s)/Character(s): RinShiemi, RinYukio/Yukio, Rin, mention of Shiemi
Words: 858 words
Summary: Yukio found that Shiemi was where he used to be, behind Rin's back
A/N: happened before everyone found out that Rin is Satan's son. Un-betaed.

Comments

[rinhail]

This has a very adult feel to it. The characters definitely seem older, which isn't a problem. I just thought I'd mention that for no real reason. XD

Anyway, I really enjoyed your writing. And it's always a pleasure to see another Ao no Exorcist fanfic online. C:

[velfatish]

If you didn't point it out i wouldn't realize. Is it appropriate though for people their age? Now i'm worried,dkjkdjkjkad

Thank you for reading :)

[rinhail]

I don't see where its inappropriate. I think what I meant was their way of thinking is very adult-like, not their actions. So no worries. The great thing about fanfiction is you can basically do anything you want. :D

You're most welcome.

[velfatish]

I see it's good then, i'm scared somehow i mess up. But the next story i'm writing is even more messed up OTL

[cloudofdoom]

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
You are a wonderful writer. :')
Gah! And that's all I can say because this is just so sad yet so sweet.

MOAR! I wish Yukio would know too!

♥

[velfatish]

You're making me blush,ksdakjasdkkjdskjds
Sadly i cannot let him know /hides

Thanks for reading :)

[rizuka]

OMG this is soooo nice 8D it is as if Yukio is more mature than Rin but IMO he's just hiding his feelings xD

[velfatish]

I'm glad the message came across, thanks for reading

[la_armada]

aw~! brother love <3 :)

[velfatish]

The title of this anime is actually 'ao no bromance', of course there will be bbrotherly love lol
Thanks for reading