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velocitea

Six Degrees of Separation - Bill

Sep 22, 2007 17:26

title: Six Degrees of Separation (part 1/6)
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gregoria44 September 23 2007, 01:19:44 UTC

Really good. Sorry not more coherent, but the hour is late.

I like the snapshot quality to this, and it's good to see a glimpse of Bill's love for Fleur, rather than it being used as a comic device - 'pretty girls are so annoying, as are the French...' blah.

And of couse George would want to carry on fighting.

look forward to more, thank you.

gregoria44 September 23 2007, 01:24:13 UTC

Oh, and I love your wallpaper, btw.

velocitea September 23 2007, 07:20:48 UTC

thaaanks! (and glad you like the wallpaper too =] )

jumbled_words September 23 2007, 07:57:48 UTC

This is amazing. I love how you give just a little peek into Bill's mind. You even managed to make Fleur not annoying, which is quite a feat, actually (I've got nothing against her pretties, I just can't stand phonetically written dialogue).

Oh, and that header pic of yours? Totally swoon worthy. I think I stared at it for a good ten seconds just thinking "whoa".

velocitea September 23 2007, 08:29:56 UTC

thanks so much!!

haha yeahhh that's gaspard ulliel (idk if you've seen hannibal rising, he's in it). he just struck me as being total young!regulus worty =]

dorotea September 24 2007, 18:51:31 UTC

This was beautiful. I enjoyed seeing Bill's POV. Lovely!

velocitea September 24 2007, 22:54:17 UTC

thanks!

foxie_trot September 27 2007, 04:00:32 UTC

hey, just some random here commenting that I think your writing is really good. I was quite impressed. ^_^

though I would have liked a little more ... but thats just me being a whoring bitch. :]

velocitea September 27 2007, 04:11:26 UTC

thanks, i'm so glad you liked it!

well, there is going to be more, but from the other weasley bros, and ginny, of course. so go right on whoring =D

and i love random people!