SGA RPS Fanfic: Imperfect. Joe/David. NC-17.

[velocitygrass]

Note/Warning: This is RPS.

Title: Imperfect
Author: velocitygrass
Pairing: Joe Flanigan/David Hewlett, mention of Joe/Katherine and David/Jane
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: None of this happened. It's all made up, fantasy, not real.
Warnings: Partner Betrayal
Word count: 2695
Summary: For them, hiatus meant being away from each other. It also meant that kissing

Comments

[therentgirls]

Wow. This was lovely and painful. Just perfect.

[velocitygrass]

Thank you so much :)

[dodificus]

I loved the clear line between the two of them in public and the two of them the minute the hotel door closed.

I also loved the fact that Joe asked this and David liked that he felt the need to ask him:

David took in a small breath. He knew that this wasn't the suggestion of hiding that it sounded like. His skin would be fine after a shower. This was something else. And Joe usually didn't ask this kind of thing of him. Even now, he looked back down as if realizing that he didn't have the right to ask anything of David.

[velocitygrass]

I loved the clear line between the two of them in public and the two of them the minute the hotel door closed.
Yeah, that... just happened. Actually, I don't even think that they wouldn't have such a conversation even behind closed doors (say in their trailers), it's just that in this case, they've been really on the edge all morning (and the weeks leading up to it).

I also loved the fact that Joe asked this and David liked that he felt the need to ask him:
I loved that too. Joe/David gives me the opportunity to write intense pining even though they're together. Hmm. It might be similar to liking intimacy before romance for John/Rodney. It's possibly a fascination with a disconnect between physical intimacy and emotional and in the case of Joe/David rational or appropriate or whatever you would call what their minds dictate their relationship should be like. Oops, sorry for going meta on you ;)

Thank you :)

[perfica]

This was raw, harsh and perfect. Thank you!

[velocitygrass]

Awww, thank you!

[mezzo_cammin]

Oh, that hurt. And yet, it was beautiful, too. And oh, hot. I almost forgot the hotness, because it was so painful. Stupid hiatus.

[velocitygrass]

It's strange how Joe/David can be all of that all at the same time. It's one of the things I love about writing this pairing.

Thank you :)

[mezzo_cammin]

they definitely can be. BTW - I finally saw the interview that your icon was taken from, and wow - did Joe get all teasing with the "oh, he wants me to direct him," or what? And David, with the witty comeback. I loved it!

[omg_wtf_yeah]

Lovely. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Their banter was charming as hell and I particularly liked the part where Joe asked David not to sleep with Jane -- it said a lot and it was very sweet/sad. Thanks! =)