Comments | veltana: One-shot: Just one kiss

veltana

One-shot: Just one kiss

Apr 09, 2013 11:16

Title: Just one kiss
Paring: Yongguk/Himchan
Rating: nc-17
Genre: AU, smut
Summary: Yongguk and Himchan gets stuck overnight at a hotel after their flight has been cancelled.
Notes: My dearest Momma blackheart_lies wanted BangHim for valentines, yeah I'm just a few months late xD

( “Wanna go down and get a drink at the bar?” )

fandom: b.a.p, genre: au, genre: smut, pairing: yongguk/himchan, rating: nc-17, length: one-shot

Comments 11

veltana April 9 2013, 09:21:01 UTC

Spot for Momma :DD I hope you like it ^^ ♥

blackheart_lies April 9 2013, 11:48:58 UTC

THIS IS MINE! ALL MINE! *dances*
Ok.
So yeah, I love it. Obviously.
I love that tiny little moment of uncertainty, that tiny moment of hesitation where I thought "omg they ain't gonna do it!" because that for me is what makes this feel like a real BangHim moment. ('cause I'm just a little delusional)
Himchan as always, floors me. Damn him for being so perfect.
Yongguk being all sweet and cute makes me feel squishy.
Oh! This is so hot btw! The detail... *mouth wide open* Love it! Love it! Love it!
I'll probably have to come back to this at some point and ramble some more but right now I'm just gonna roll about with my feels ^^
You done such an awesome job with this, thank you for my present, I love it ♥

veltana April 16 2013, 14:48:58 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I think my smut writing skills are starting to wither off I had such problems from time to time xD I'm really really happy you liked it :DD ♥

crossing_by April 9 2013, 10:28:08 UTC

Hootttttttt!!
So hot i must stop my walking to the parking lot and try not scare people for getting my eyes pop out from its shells

Awesome!

veltana April 16 2013, 14:49:13 UTC

Thank you so much :DD

badoy April 9 2013, 13:45:25 UTC

i love this himchan. couldn't explain how much.

"I want us to take this a little slower, it’s my first time you know.” i read slower as shower and i was about to mentally slap byg. how could he ask for a shower at that time. haha and yeah byg's sweetness here tugs my heartstrings. -_-

veltana April 16 2013, 14:49:52 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting :DD

volatileflame April 9 2013, 14:03:08 UTC

i can't quite come up with something coherent, so i'm just gonna flail

｜∩＞ω＜∩｜*flails*

veltana April 16 2013, 14:50:21 UTC

*flail over your flailing* thank you so much! :DD

How many times... vonegirl1 June 3 2013, 18:45:55 UTC

is too many to read this story?! OMG...IDEK why I waited to comment but seriously this story just keeps me coming back. You did such a wonderful job with the sudden change in their dynamics. The unsurety with each other after the big reveal was so on the money. I swear to you, no lie (wouldn't dream of it) I've read this at least eight times. Obsessed, no? Well, I just wanted you to know its one of my favorites. B.A.P. has quickly become a favorite group and I love this pairing! Thanks so much.

Re: How many times... veltana June 16 2013, 20:59:09 UTC

OMG I DIDN'T SEE THIS COMMENT UNTIL YESTERDAY!!! So glad you decided to comment, it makes me real happy to hear that someone re-reads my stories :DD thankyouthankyouthankyou :)