Irrational Fear [Oneshot]

Jul 29, 2009 15:18

Title: Irrational Fear
Author: velvet_liquor
Beta: paralyzing_time
Chapters: One-shot / Drabble
Pairing: Aoi x Uruha
Genre: Romance, fluff
Rating: PG
Warnings: Pure love =]
Summary: “Why would you be afraid of happiness…?” Aoi asked (…). “Because it never lasts… And I don’t want it to end…”
Author’s comment: I don’t really know where it came from, it almost wrote it itself… ( Read more... )

#pg, : the gazette, ' oneshot, :: aoi/uruha

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izumi_luvsjrock July 29 2009, 18:00:02 UTC
Sooooooo sweet and fluffy and loving~;A; ah it was just what I needed today.I'm at work on my ipod feeling all crappy so thanks dear<33333

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 18:03:56 UTC
I was glad to provide your daily dose of fluff <3 =]

Thanks for reading ;)

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brokenhime July 29 2009, 19:41:48 UTC
I know, it's kind off weird... But you almost made me cry xD
Gawd, I'm so emotional at the moment.
Anyways, I really like it! ^_^
It was so sweet and fluffy and sweet en fluffy and *gets smacked on the head*
Well, you know what I mean...

*hugs and gives what ever kind of cookies you like*

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brokenhime July 29 2009, 19:42:33 UTC
I even failed at writing of TT^TT

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 19:46:26 UTC
It's okay XD

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 19:45:31 UTC
Aaaaaaw *glomps* *o*
that is the cutest comment I've ever received *o* I've almost made someone cry *o* I need to hug youuuu *hugs you tight*

That is the kind of comment I need to write moaaar 8D nya nya *o* *gets all happy*

*takes the cookies* nom nom ^o^
Thanks <33

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aliceninefreak7 July 29 2009, 21:34:17 UTC
I won't call it sappy(or fluffy) and your ending DOES NOT SUCK!!!
I love the whole thing! This side of Uruha is how I like him to seem, scared and timid! Not many people pick up that side! They were so nice together as well, with that little bit of sympathy for Uruha(and Aoi's wet shirt) thrown in.
:D
I'd be lying if I said I didn't really enjoy this!

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 21:43:16 UTC
Aaaw, thank you <333 =] *hugs you tightly*

Regarding my ending, I would have loved to find the kind of line that leave the reader speechless, you know.. the kind of line where you're stuck staring at the screen, just "wow..." xD But that's not that easy to find... é_è

Anyway, I'm still glad people seem to enjoy what I wrote, and that's all that matters to me =] <3

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ashley_regret July 29 2009, 21:44:31 UTC
this is the fluffiest and cutest fic i've read..ever XD
omg, i love your aoi, he's just so cute!! lucky uruha XD

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 21:50:14 UTC
*wide smile* =D
Uruha is even luckier when Aoi does other kind of things... *wriggles her eyebrows suggestively*
Huh huh ^w^

Thanks for reading and commenting <3 ;)

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velvet_liquor July 29 2009, 23:07:15 UTC
Aw *o* <3 I wasn't too sure if it would be good... writing a 100% fluff fic.. (usually I write smut with it xD).. but, I'm glad to see people liked this one *o*
=] *proud to have made you happy* ^w^

And.. Now that you mention it... It's a bit like Shining Star... I guess I like it when Uruha is a bit vulnerable and hurt... And Aoi is just there to bring him all the love he deserves... *sheepish grin* ^__^

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