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velvet_mace

Chameleon Chapter 2

Jun 25, 2011 17:52

Title: Chameleon
Pairing: Eventual Sherlock/John, iffily platonic Harry/John
Rating: R
Features/Warnings: Crossover with the Sentinel, AU, Plotfic. Forced Bonding, Non-con, coersion, imprisonment, incesty vibes, mild violence.
Summary: Written for This Prompt: In a world filled with Sentinels with heightened senses, strength and endurance, and ( Read more... )

sherlock/john, rating: r, fic: bbc sherlock, chameleon

Comments 67

golden_bastet June 26 2011, 01:15:14 UTC

I don't know the fandom, but I'm finding this really interesting! Thanks for posting. :D

velvet_mace June 26 2011, 17:53:59 UTC

I'm glad you like this without knowing the fandom (or more accurately being steeped in the fanon meme that came out of that canon). It's a really fun universe to work in and I'm glad I can make others enjoy it.

anonymous June 26 2011, 01:20:00 UTC

FUCK! I LOVE THIS!

velvet_mace June 26 2011, 17:54:12 UTC

Yea!

likes2lurk June 26 2011, 01:25:15 UTC

I still think it's hysterical that John is the Phantom of the Hospital.

I love that you've made John clever, as an astounding number of fics fail to realize that John does have a brain, and is actually a very good man to have in a tough situation. He . He's not just Sherlock's DID.

velvet_mace June 26 2011, 17:57:16 UTC

Oh yes, John's clever, but he's not genius level clever (and he doesn't have much pretensions). Up to now he's been up against ordinary Sentinels who've all been taught the same tricks and Mycroft who has been too distant and lazy to have much of a direct hand. Sherlock's going to be a wee bit tougher to fool.

cjandre June 26 2011, 01:49:56 UTC

I actually went and read what you had on the kink meme - but I'm re-reading to see what's different. No hardship there! This is a really interesting verse!

velvet_mace June 26 2011, 17:58:27 UTC

It's easier to read on a journal, I know. Damn that 4300 character limit! Can't even get a good scene in that amount of time. And the complicated nesting... totally breaks the flow.

eightnoon June 26 2011, 01:56:00 UTC

Haha, very clever, John! Keep those Sentinels chasing after their own tails.

I like that in your Sentinel/Guide world there is an extreme lack of Guides as it makes John that much more valuable. Very interesting twist. I am very curious now to see the meeting of Sherlock and John.

velvet_mace June 26 2011, 18:00:00 UTC

There's a reason for the extreme lack of guides that I get into next chapter (or maybe chapter after next). Life didn't used to be so harsh for Guides although they were never exactly treated great.