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velvet_mace

Chameleon Chapter 7

Jul 22, 2011 17:05

Title: Chameleon
Pairing: Eventual Sherlock/John, iffily platonic Harry/John
Rating: R
Genre: Crossover with the Sentinel, AU, Plotfic.
Warnings: Forced Bonding, Non-con, coersion, imprisonment, incesty vibes, mild violence.
Summary: Written for This Prompt: In a world filled with Sentinels with heightened senses, strength and endurance, and ( Read more... )

sherlock/john, rating: r, fic: bbc sherlock, chameleon

Comments 199

AHHHH anonymous July 23 2011, 00:33:58 UTC

AHHHHH so much tension so much I could cut a slice out of it!

Re: AHHHH velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:01:11 UTC

Thank you!

lindentreeisle July 23 2011, 00:45:28 UTC

HOLY FUCK that was delicious. Christmas has come early. :D

(Can I ask why no more posting on that comm? Dramaz?)

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:00:43 UTC

The mod is insane and random and threatened to erase all my entries because I put non-con on the same line in my header as AU. You know what, fuck that noise. It may be by far the biggest com, but it's not the only community.

Anyway, I barely go there anyway, except to see what gets recced on sundays.

lindentreeisle July 23 2011, 01:03:27 UTC

Weirrrddd. ALWAYS WITH THE DRAMA. I did ask though, because I'm an insatiable gossip-monger.

Really, I loved every second of this. I didn't think you could match the epic mind-battle in the last chapter, but you DID. :D They were so close to the edge of bonding it was excruciating. And then all the delicious anticipation.

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:08:23 UTC

I love it when Sherlock pounces on John. I worried though that all of John's flailing would be boring, but he did genuinely try to throw Sherlock off his scent, he just wasn't any good at it.

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ladyredcrest July 23 2011, 00:55:31 UTC

Oh noes!!! Sherlock, what are you doing?

Another good chapter. Looking forward to more, as always. I new today was going to be a good day for Sherlock posts. *wink*

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:01:47 UTC

Thank you!

karadin July 23 2011, 01:01:17 UTC

EEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee amazing tension you've created! Bravo!

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:02:05 UTC

Thank you!

kholly July 23 2011, 01:06:19 UTC

God that was so tense and well paced. I flew through it.

John had dealt with smart before and he’d dealt with persistent, but he’d never dealt with both at the same time. It was a deadly combination.
Yeah, Sherlock isn't going to be like any other adversary he's ever had.

It wasn’t hard to look upset. Hell, he was upset.
The best lies are based in the truth.

Canada is so nice.

HosAdmin1 was hardly a humdinger.
People are pathetic with passwords. Truly.

Ha! Empathic tricks are nothing compared to cold hard data. You may fool my mind, but you can’t fool a paper trail.
You've been doing it all along, but every time I like how much Sherlock is going to win precisely because he has something more than his sentinel senses to rely on.

As much as I'm still rooting in vain for John right now I can't help reading the Sherlock/Sarah interaction and think damn he's good. He's intimidating me.

And then suddenly it hit him like a ton of bricks. This was real.
Poor John. I just want to hug him.

The real Phantom was somewhere else near by, ( ... )

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 01:10:47 UTC

Thank you so much. And I'm so relieved that the parts other than their final fight were interesting enough to keep you reading. I worried that it would seem like Sherlock was too lackadaisical about chasing John down.

kholly July 23 2011, 01:46:49 UTC

interesting enough to keep you reading

That kind of made me laugh because it seems like such an absurd thing for you to be worrying about.

velvet_mace July 23 2011, 03:02:43 UTC

I think all writers worry, but thanks!