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xandrabelle September 24 2012, 01:09:10 UTC
I love this! I've been totally into Teen Wolf lately and suddenly here you are, writing in a fandom for the pair I'm shipping!

I love the part with the shoe. And how all through the story, Stiles keeps admiring Derek's cut body. They really need to get together and have sexy times! Will you be writing a bit more on this story? I certainly hope this isn't the only story that you're inspired to do for Teen Wolf.

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 01:30:41 UTC
I've gotta finish my other fics. But maybe if a bunny bites this hard and is short enough not to be a burden.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. The pairing is kinda subtle. I don't know, I just couldn't force it to go whole hog without writing chapters to make it so. If I make a sequel to this, I could probably have that developing in the background but I have a feeling that plot will probably over take it and make it mostly about whatever Peter is up to and getting Derek his ideal pack.

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xandrabelle September 24 2012, 02:26:38 UTC
Yep you can feel the creep factor from Peter from a mile away. But Derek is a bit too close to see it. It would be nice to see him get a family and pack and happy. The guy has been through too much pain.

I am glad they didn't give Derek a canon girl in the show so the door is open for him and Stiles to get together.

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 05:52:13 UTC
If they gave Derek a canon girlfriend, can you just imagine the wank?

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nagasasu September 24 2012, 01:52:27 UTC
I think this is a pretty awesome as the only dark fic I've read in this fandom. Although I did wish Stiles had stuck it to Derek much longer, because like, changing him against his will, not cool Derek!

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 02:09:54 UTC
Stiles is unhealthily forgiving in the show. I think if I wrote more, he'd still be sticking it to Derek for a while, though not just actively hating on him. Just kind of being verbally snotty.

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maxthebd September 24 2012, 02:08:46 UTC
Christ is no longer on a crutch as much as you've laid the man in a wheelchair.

That said, I adore your Stiles!voice.

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 02:10:15 UTC
Thanks!

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eightnoon September 24 2012, 05:18:53 UTC
Oh yes, I gotta love The Chase. And, of course, it bites him on the butt. Haha! Poor Stiles, he just can't catch a break.

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 05:53:01 UTC
Chasing is one of my many, many kinks. I've been searching the fandom for a good chase scene and I've come across a couple, but they were too short. So I had to write my own.

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taikodragon September 24 2012, 05:43:40 UTC
I am so very happy to see you writing in this fandom! :D Thanks for sharing! I like how Stiles just accepts it and is like, "Fine, you want me, you got ME."

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velvet_mace September 24 2012, 05:53:58 UTC
Yeah, Derek may have bitten off more than he could chew here.

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taikodragon September 24 2012, 05:56:59 UTC
Just possibly. *evil grin*

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