Aug 14, 2008 15:10
it reminds me of a haiku. so rich in its simplicity. the story lies in what is not said and is left up to the reader to decide. we don't know if the story is a tragedy, a comedy, or something else. it could be viewed as entirely mundane, or it could evoke a well-spring of emotion.
my humble attempt: She held her breath, and jumped.
writer's block
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