Title: Counting Ripples Fandom: Flight Rising Length: 1080 words Rating: Teen Summary: Just two friends being friends together. (This story is set a little before " Kyrszith's Price.")
You did really well with making the lack of names seem natural. Especially with them both being male! I like the way they try to make sense of each other.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ It wasn't nearly as hard as the story I once wrote that used no pronouns whatsoever for the two main characters (because I wanted to leave their gender ambiguous), but it did take some doing.
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You did really well with making the lack of names seem natural. Especially with them both being male! I like the way they try to make sense of each other.
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