memories of a lady...

Oct 30, 2004 23:58

Most of all I remember you. Those first shy eyes. That awkward beat, with friends. I was so new, raw. An expierienced innocent. Why is it your face, your smiles I recall. There have been others, and yet none with the sweet simplicty of our bond. So girlish, womanly, young, beautiful, and foolish.
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-blinkingsnarlgrrrrrowl~ inkfiend October 31 2004, 08:32:22 UTC
Delicious delightful insightful wicked and divine...much like you!

A truly breathtaking piece...with refinement an excellent stand-alone chapter in your autobiography.

all turned on and romantic feeling all at once

You sure do have a way with words, my friend ~

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Re: -blinkingsnarlgrrrrrowl~ velvettart November 1 2004, 02:04:03 UTC
You are kind. "all turned on and romantic feeling all at once" I adore that feeling. Beautiful turn of phrase. :]

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njbeachbum October 31 2004, 08:56:31 UTC
what a wonderful post. It seems to sum up past loves no matter what the gender combinations. The look into the little things that make up a relationship was so honest. This really struck me.

Thank you for sharing.

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velvettart November 1 2004, 02:07:22 UTC
You honor me by your post. It always seems to be the little things that are most remembered. You are welcome, and thank you for your considerate and caring comment. :]
~R

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brother_bliss November 1 2004, 06:50:57 UTC
**sniffle***...I hate you made me cry with that one. That so sweetly sad. I love it. ( blows nose.)

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velvettart November 2 2004, 15:36:18 UTC
ah thank you. ::hug:: I will write you soon, I just have been super busy. Also was away last night. ::hug::

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brother_bliss November 3 2004, 13:57:59 UTC
I understand. Take you time, just as long as yopu don't mind getting e-mails from a babbling num nut like me.

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delights_not_me November 1 2004, 23:57:21 UTC
i had to take this with me home last night to read it because the internet cafe was closing practically on my head. glad i did. the three of us had a lovely time.

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velvettart November 2 2004, 15:42:05 UTC
glad to hear it. :)

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ecips November 7 2004, 08:00:37 UTC
Can you feel how hard my heart is pounding?
Thank you.

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