Uncountably Infinite - Chapter 4

Jun 09, 2011 16:02

Chapter 4

Of Perception and Reality

Back in Astrometrics

With the sensors continuing their search for Tersilium, Janeway focused once more on Seven.

“Harry said you needed to look over a few complicated algorithms?” Janeway addressed Seven, finding herself wanting to stay in Seven’s presence for a little longer.

“Yes, Captain,” Seven replied ( Read more... )

vendetta17, crossover, dwp, nc-17, uncountably infinite, pairing: miranda/andy, voyager/dwp, pairing: janeway/7

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writtensword June 10 2011, 11:56:39 UTC
oohhhhhh! Wonderful!!

The interaction between Miranda and Janeway is awesome!! :D

And I got so nostalgic about the J/7 stuff! :D :D :D

Great chapter!! More!!! more!! :D

*impatient flailing of arms*

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vendetta17 June 10 2011, 13:55:14 UTC
Vielen Dank! I am glad you liked their interactions. Yes, I am feeling quite nostalgic about the J/7 scenes too. What really helps is the fact that I am currently re-watching Voyager.

Again, I will try to update soon. Cheers!

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ragelikeafire June 10 2011, 12:52:44 UTC
So I am getting the blame for the longer chapter? LOL ;)

Seriously, I really love what you have done with the suggestions!

I love the chemistry between J/7 and J/M. Brilliant!

I'm with Writtensword, I would love to see Miranda confide in Janeway. Do you think Janeway would return the sentiment? For some reason I see these two women as Kindred spirits. I forsee a great friendship forming!

Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve!

Well Done :)

Rage Out!

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vendetta17 June 10 2011, 14:00:45 UTC
Well, I don't really see people complaining that a chapter is too long, so I doubt you are facing a burden here, being blamed for this. But it's true, when I send you the chapter it had 3200 words, after I finished implementing your suggestions, the chapter suddenly had 4500 words.

I am glad you like my take on your suggestions.

I also see J/M as kindred spirits. I am not sure Janeway returning the sentiment would work with the plot, but she may drop some hints if Miranda confesses, which I am still unsure about. I had a confession of Miranda to Janeway planed, but a little later into the story. It is still the same day. Then again, I am over 4 chapters into the story. I am very uncertain, right now.

I guess I will just let my muse do the talking...er...writing.

Thanks again for the help and the comment!

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