Uncountably Infinite - Chapter 5

Jun 12, 2011 22:47



A/N: This chapter is twice the shout-out to quiethearted, whose wonderful story Deflection inspired this story and who is wholly responsible for my presence in this fandom (Yes, I am still blaming you :-))

Prologue
Chapter 1

Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

Uncountably Infinite
by Vendetta17 aka crASHed

For FH

Chapter 5

Of Scotch and ( Read more... )

vendetta17, crossover, dwp, nc-17, uncountably infinite, pairing: miranda/andy, voyager/dwp, pairing: janeway/7

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insix June 13 2011, 04:44:01 UTC
I'm quite pleased with how this chapter turned out. It's a different feeling reading it for 'work' and reading it for pleasure. I'm enjoying this quite a lot. =)

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vendetta17 June 13 2011, 12:19:07 UTC
Thank you! I am glad you liked the finished version. Cheers!

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ikbenniethier June 13 2011, 08:29:47 UTC
I think it's a great story and don't worry about too much dialogue, your writing is great. I can't wait for the next update! And I like junior :)

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vendetta17 June 13 2011, 12:20:03 UTC
Thank you! Glad too see you're not bothered by too much talking :-)

Yes, Junior is fun to write for...

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8) lady_orlean June 13 2011, 09:37:16 UTC
Great update.
*lol* Andy's "interacts" with the computer are cute.
(does not mean I would do better there in her situation *gg*)

I'm curious how this will turn out and why there's no timeline after their "kidnapping" to the Voyager.

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Re: 8) vendetta17 June 13 2011, 12:21:45 UTC
Thank you! Yes, I imagine dealing with the computer can be quite confusing in the beginning. Glad you liked the update.

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radak June 13 2011, 09:55:54 UTC
I like this, especially Junior being afraid of Miranda:) It's fun!

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vendetta17 June 13 2011, 12:22:44 UTC
Thank you! Miranda going after Junior was really fun to write, so I am glad it is also fun to read. Cheers!

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ragelikeafire June 13 2011, 12:25:55 UTC
Another great chapter. I don't think it's moving too slowly at all. I like the regular short chapter approach and lots of dialogue. As long as the story continues to move forward and that you give us something new each time, that's all that matters to me.

Your characterisations are good too, which is often really hard when dealing with two cross-over universes!

Well done. Looking forward to more!

Rage out!

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vendetta17 June 13 2011, 12:32:48 UTC
Thank you, that is a relief to hear. When I was working on the corrections for this chapter and suddenly realized that the next one will contain a lot of talking again, I got all nervous.
Yes, the story will continue too move forward.

I didn't realize in the beginning what I am doing to myself when I decided to tackle a crossover. Four freaking characters. Sigh.

I am glad you like it. Cheers!

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