companion piece to The Drowned Phoenician Sailor

Dec 27, 2007 16:10

Title: Belladonna, the Lady of the Rocks
By: Venilia
HP, R/S, AU, NC-17
Description: Remus wants to tell Sirius about how he never dreams about anyone else.
companion piece to The Drowned Phoenician Sailor.

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hp fic, hp: r/s

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brighty18 December 28 2007, 00:20:57 UTC
Oh, this is really lovely and joyous! And, again, your narrative voice is so very accomplished. I love the use of humor and your sex is very... sexy? Beautiful? Real?

Will you ever tell us the deal with the perfume?

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venny_jones December 28 2007, 00:32:33 UTC
I don't know the deal with the perfume myself, actually. Sometimes my hands type these things without checking in with my thought process.

Perhaps it was an amusing mishap involving a matron with fond dreams of monarchy and a disturbing penchant for quoting the Brontes. Perhaps Sirius had to use his masculine wiles to persuade an informant. Perhaps there was an infortunate run-in with a clerk at one of those bath stores (the kind who squirt mango-cucumber-musk body spray first, and ask questions later).

Perhaps Sirius was just flirting with some bint.

I do know that nothing really happened, though. Remus is just suspicios and depressed.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I confess to liking this version much better myself.

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brighty18 December 28 2007, 01:01:38 UTC
Perhaps it was an amusing mishap involving a matron with fond dreams of monarchy and a disturbing penchant for quoting the Brontes.
Mmm... that could be me someday!

Oh, that just made me laugh! As did this:

Perhaps there was an infortunate run-in with a clerk at one of those bath stores (the kind who squirt mango-cucumber-musk body spray first, and ask questions later).
Those people are most certainly Death Eaters. ***shudders***

Poor Remus, but this ended very happily, though.

And your style really reminds me of someone, I just cannot think of who.

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venilia December 28 2007, 02:22:56 UTC
*nods* Perfume people are definately evil.

Let me know if you remember who I remind you of!

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isisanubis December 28 2007, 00:53:49 UTC
A was heart-breaking and beautiful. B is....how i've always wanted things to happen. lovely. (*warm and fuzzy smiles*)

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venilia December 28 2007, 01:05:08 UTC
Yeah, me too. But then we wouldn't have the whole series. So we have fanfic!

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venilia December 28 2007, 02:20:42 UTC
Thank you! I like this one better, myself.

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quartetship December 28 2007, 01:51:00 UTC
This was just beautiful!

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venilia December 28 2007, 02:21:13 UTC
Thank you!

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forest_rose December 28 2007, 02:07:01 UTC
This was lovely. I enjoyed both versions, but this one makes me happy!

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venilia December 28 2007, 02:21:36 UTC
This one makes me pretty happy too. Glad you like it.

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