extremely belated crossposting

[venusian_eye]

title: Firebird
fandom: Black Swan
warnings: damn near anything you can think of.
disclaimer: not mine
notes: post-movie. WIP.  sapphic.

chapter one:

Comments

[ryuuvictoire]

I read this on ff dot net and loved it there.
What kind of beta do you need?

[ohmeguro]

/has already fangirled

HEY HEY YOU KNOW YOU CAN COME TO ME FOR BETA-ING :D

[amsomniac]

I really enjoyed this! You paid a lot of attention to their characters... kind of lacking in the usual gay ninja sex/explosions department, but I'm sure that's coming later.

[leahnari]

Ooh, how pretty. It's a nice continuation of the movie.
Oh Lily. This is in character for her, and at the same time, better, like she's trying to be a better person. How sweet.
I'd love to see the continuation. What kind of beta help do you need?

[obseletevulture]

You timing is SO PERFECT. XD

But yes, will be doing my best to beta while here? maybe? Like...this chapter at least or something? *lipbite*

*READS LIKE CRAZY*

*wants to screen this kind of?*

[obseletevulture]

Uhm...

Just one thing so far? Point shoes apparently REALLY KILL YOUR FEET. Even with a pedicure, I can't imagine a ballerina who can pull off toe cleavage so to speak? Maybe that's just me... *wince* Not like I know for sure, but it's REALLY hard on the feet. Especially the toes. There's that nail-split in movie? That's pretty normal, apparently. Not just in a NINA'S CRAAAAZY kind of way.

But yeah...I...I really like this pairing? As a straight chick. Poor Nina, she just... She's so after Lily, and has to hold in so bad over it. Hold in on everything... The sense of that comes over really well here so far...

IT LOOKS GREAT~♥

*HAS NO IDEA WHY YOU WORRY ABOUT BETA-ING NNNNGH*