H/C Drabble 'Zeus & Aphrodite'

[veracifix]

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Comments

[cosmo_mouse]

Very good drabble! Lots of imagery and lots of heat.

The song quote is very fitting, just one thing (being pedantic and everything :P) it's Tin Tin Out featuring Emma Bunton... just put the CD on as well :)

Any more on the way?

[veracifix]

And right there we have evidence of the unreliability of the WWW. Heard it on the radio :P

I'm fixing it right now. Thanks Clare :)

And..i'll try ;D

[cosmo_mouse]

I'd actually forgotten how much I love the song, been in my CD rack for years.

My god! 1999!!! *dies*

[veracifix]

I actually have no idea what the rest of it sounds like, those lines stuck out so i wrote it down in my head. She's a UK singer? Huh, i know nothing about her and i'm shamelessly using her lyrics #_#;

Make me some icons before you die! XD

[veracifix]

haha, it was mutual ;)

well *phew* i'm so glad you like it. I was trying pretty hard to put it in motion, cause after you reread it ten times, nothing seems exciting.

Only if you do ;)

[veracifix]

Hahaha, we'll see.
But inspiration needs to come find me first.

[marcasite]

I loved the visuals of this drabble. I could feel the grass and the rain, very powerful. Loved it!

[veracifix]

Thank you :) I opted simplicity for the last part, i knew you guys could use your imagination instead of all those boring adjectives ;)

[bytheshoreline]

Wow, Erica. Sexy. Incredibly sexy. And your amazing, poetic style and imagery make it all the more so.

He shields her from the downpour from above.

She drowns.

The ending. So powerful. I honestly don't think I could love you any more than I already do ;)

[veracifix]

*laughes* :D That's why it's such a weird drabble! my attempt to get away from all the poetry :P

Aw, love you too! ;) If i fix up my fic, don't be surprised to see it in your inbox. (Although i'm leaning towards tossing it out)

Thanks for the lovely comment Liz :)

[bytheshoreline]

Ah, but it's not a bad thing! Honest :D Your style is so gorgeous. I don't think I know of another fic writer who uses imagery like you do ;)

No, don't throw it out! ;P

[starhawk2005]

Oh, lovely, lovely drabble.

The imagery is great, the flow... me likey! ;)

[veracifix]

Thanks :) it's so nice how you seem to have time for everyone's writing :D

[starhawk2005]

Just how I like to do things. If I want people to actually review my writing, then it'd be hypocritical of me not to review anyone else's writing... ;)