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veracifix

You are House.

Aug 04, 2005 11:16

Title: End of the Line
Subject: House/Cameron
Word count: 3225
Rating: PG-13
Preview: When you stand at one end of the line, you think that point the start. You look toward the other end, that's the one you call the end. What if you stood there instead? Would it be the start?
Notes: (firstly, above is not an excerpt) This is written in a second- ( Read more... )

fic, house/cameron

Comments 22

house_fan76 August 6 2005, 04:22:19 UTC

Excellent. Love your writing style. This was very original. I also loved the mention of the rods and cones in the eyes and the trachea and oesophagus.

Hope you write more. I really enjoyed this.

veracifix August 6 2005, 04:39:53 UTC

Well i'm glad you did :) i do enjoy this style as well, it's natural. I guess i added the mention of oesophagus and such was because i like accurate medical analysis and also to emphasize the fact of my interpretatin that he thinks about these things--insanity if you must :D

I hope i can cook up another plot soon ^_^

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veracifix August 6 2005, 22:52:21 UTC

Glad you thought so :)

its_magic_3 October 14 2005, 07:44:14 UTC

That was absolutely wonderful! So well written with brilliant characterisation. Having all the medical references made it so real. Thanksfor sharing :o)

veracifix October 14 2005, 23:07:45 UTC

surprise to get another comment! hmm..what is it, 2 months later ;D lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

its_magic_3 October 15 2005, 08:00:30 UTC

Sorry :o) It's because someone I know recommended it on their journal :D