A Little Sum'in' Sum'in'

[veraliana]

I got bored. So I wrote a ficlet, yaaaay. Man, I'm tired. Anyway. It's for Tales of Vesperia.

Title: Love Hurts
Characters: Rita/Karol, Judith, Raven.
Genre: Mild humor/romance.
Fandom: Tales of Vesperia
Spoilers: None whatsoever.
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I do not own Tales of Vesperia. Duh.

Summary: Which does Rita love more: Karol or gummies?

Note: In this

Comments

[alexlance]

Short yet funny an entertaining. I believe that you have potential to create something much lager I'll be expecting an epic Rita x Karol from you. I think I'll read it again ^_^. though I got an BIT..just an bit confused as to weather Rtia was blushing, red form anger or an mix of both at hearing such things?
either way this was wonderful.

[veraliana]

Oh no, you musn't expect too much! XD I'm glad you liked it. I really do want to write more Karol/Rita, but I feel the game's sequel is just begging to be written. I can't be satisfied with the ending the game left us and I'm sure I'm not the only one who feels that way.

As for Rita's blush, it's up to you to interpret ♥

[sagesoren]

Hee, that was cute! ♥

Raven's dialogue was really spot-on. Oh, Rita, you're so, so angry. Adorable little one-shot. You could even make a series of them!

Also, I know how you feel about wanting some OTP fluff and there not being any anywhere. OTL

[veraliana]

Thank you for commenting~! ♫ Raven's a fun character to write.

I could make a series! But last time I considered doing that with Jade/older!Anise, it ended up not getting written. I only wrote one. I'M LAZY LIKE THAT! I should really get around to writing some of those old ideas done no matter how silly they were.

You're so mean D; Now I feel compelled to write more. How can I waste my time if I'm honing my writing skills?! Honestly!

[snowbutton]

Oh I adore this pairing, I searched long and hard, and found this by chance. This was really cute and I didn't mind it was short at all. ♥ All the characters were in character and it was completley believable. Thanks for posting. I thought I was the only fan of this pairing. ^_^

[veraliana]

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

I agree. This pairing totally doesn't get enough love!

[snowbutton]

^_^, you're welcome, I really enjoyed it. Will you write anymore? ♥

I was really surprised at how little the fandom for this pairing is. Ususally when there is reaction between two characters, fans go wild for it. @_@ (the age difference doesn't usually bother people either x_x)

I wish I could write fanfiction. (snatches some of veraliana's skill)

[veraliana]

I'd like to write more, but they're both such incredibly awkward people when it comes to romance. I can't seem to get them to even kiss believably. At the very least I'd have to sacrifice Karol's characterization. Even though he manned up by the end of the game, I still don't think he'd have the guts to make a move on Rita. And Rita? Well, she's a tsundere XD

Nooo! Don't take my skill ;-; I have so very little.