Part II

[verbal_impact]

There is no pain

Comments

[katywho]

is this still pertaining to the same subject as the first part? it seems to be about some one else towards the end.

I know!!

[verbal_impact]

I know, it's starting to come together now, isn't it? There is still more left to thi story. I will now fill in the blanks from the last poem: after the death of my friend, I started hating myself for what had happened to him. I then started to hate him for how he had handled the situation... I guess that was the best way I was able to handle the problem at the time. In the beginning of this story, I took the perspective of how my friend would see the afterlife. I then took it to how I felt through what had happened. The pain and the anguish I had felt could not be summed into words... I tried my best, though. "I need one more start..." that was pertaining to myself wishing I could have done something to stop the ordeal, but to no avail. See how everything is falling into place? Cool, huh? I thought so.

Re: I know!!

[katywho]

lol, and you're oh so modest about it, too. :) i do like it, though. i'm almost proud of ya.

Re: I know!!

[xhurtxbyxyoux]

my heart goes out to you sweet heart!