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verbalvixen

(Untitled)

Jan 24, 2008 17:11

Title: Make You Love Me
Characters: Sylar/Mohinder (one sided)
Spoilers: Up to Powerless.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2059
Summary: Sylar wants Mohinder to love him and will do anything to get what he needs.
Author's Notes: Written for mabetini in the Sylar Ficathon with the following prompt: NC-17 or R for rating (smutty), Dominant Zane!Sylar, with some ( Read more... )

Comments 18

dana_serenity January 25 2008, 05:59:16 UTC

Wow, I can honestly say I did not see that end coming. But really wow. I love that Sylar still needs validation after all this time.

verbalvixen January 25 2008, 14:53:27 UTC

Yeah. He's such a screwed up, sad individual.. but I loves him, heh.

Thanks for commenting!

sabaceanbabe January 25 2008, 17:12:50 UTC

Wow. That was intense. I like that Mohinder didn't give up, even in the face of what he thought was certain death. And it was a great glimpse of Sylar the way he was with his mother, seeking redemption and not finding it, getting just a little more unhinged because of it.

sanguinepen January 27 2008, 21:58:41 UTC

That was great. I so did not see that ending coming.

mabetini March 22 2008, 21:47:28 UTC

This was wonderful but *SOB WEEP SOB* the ending!

Such yummy Mylar angst!

I know I've already commented on it, when you originally posted, but thank you!

vampedvixen March 22 2008, 22:47:04 UTC

Thanks luv! I'm really glad you liked it. :D

briankoussad October 17 2008, 09:46:42 UTC

( permalink ) 'Xtreme says: Awww thanks mubarak =D I'm glad you liked it You wish for what. Dude you went to italy and your wishing to wake up with that mood =(.

levitatethis March 22 2008, 21:47:50 UTC

Oh my...I was not expecting that ending. It's ripped the words out of my mouth ( ... )

vampedvixen March 22 2008, 22:52:55 UTC

Mylar certainly does lend itself to sad endings.

I think Sylar is very confused, and so broken. He really doesn't understand love, because he's never really been loved.

I didn't know what to do with Mohinder at first but then I heard my creative writing teacher saying 'Conflict, conflict, conflict!' in the back of my head and it seemed natural to bring out the part of Mohinder that's so incredibly stubborn and resistant. I like that part of him as a character and I think it's possibly the reason Mylar works in my head, because he won't just give in to Sylar because of his fear of him.

Thanks for the comments!