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[verbalvixen]

Title: Define Dangerous
Characters: Sylar, Claire.
Spoilers: Up to Season 2.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2029
Chapter: 26/?
Previously: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11, Chapter 12, Chapter 13, Chapter 14, Chapter 15, Chapter 16, Chapter 17, Chapter 18, Chapter

Comments

[m_ravensblood]

I'm pretty new to the community and the fandom for that matter, but I've just read through all of Define Dangerous up to here :) I've really enjoyed your story and am looking forward to seeing how your story turns out. Very well written :)

[verbalvixen]

Thank you so much. On behalf of the rest of the fandom and the Sylaire shippers, let me welcome you to our collective. We are Borg we will assimilate you now ;P

[winchesterjo]

“Right. Let's go see how much trouble that uncle of yours has got himself into this time. I promise not to laugh if Elle is electrifying his ass when we find him.”

LMAO!

Makes me wonder though. .If every time Peter touched Elle, he got a shock. .Just how the hell did the have sex?

LOl! Can you just tell, i got up 1/2 an hr ago?

♥ it!

[verbalvixen]

Well, Elle can touch people without electifying them. She just LIKES to electrify Peter every time they touch, she's quite a sadist that way. But I still think Peter and Elle would make out like porcupines.. very, very carefully!

Thanks for commenting :)

[raitheemohugger]

LURVE!
Yay.
This was a good chapter. Action packed and sentimental to boot. Go you!

[verbalvixen]

Thank you! I've never really been good with action scenes, so I'm happy that this one went off so well :)

[bending_sickle]

Oooh, the fightin' and the banter and the luuuurv. Well, 2.5 out of 3. And nothing says "I love you" like vengeful "How dare you hurt my girl" murder, apparently.

They were trapped. He didn't mind. - Right, "different person", sure y'are, Syalr. :) I'm glad you stressed the fightin' lust that is still in Sylar later, although I felt so sorry for his, I really haven't changed, have I?, especially because of the detatchment you brought in with He sounded far away, an observer to his own life.

...with hair of red that shone in the bright fire that danced on her palm. - For some reason, I adore this descriptive line. Something about the rhythin of the thing...
I was.. actually more worried about- - Daaw, nothing like a firebolt to patch things up.

PS: I never said, but I love your title-picture.

Typos:
and shoved froze the wall behind the woman -> and shoved froze the wall behind the woman
The ducked down a turn in the hallway -> They ducked
He continued watch as -> he continued watching or he continued to watch

Thank you!!

[verbalvixen]

Yay! The typo-finder strikes again! :)

Murder = Love = Sylaire! It's a basic math equation, hehe.

Sylar can't lose his murder lust.. because then he just wouldn't be Sylar anymore, you know? He reminds me way too much of Spike, especially in this story.. and there's this one moment in Buffy where Spike finds out he can kill bad demons.. and he's just excited about being able to kill anything after getting the chip in his head that forces him to not kill good guys.. oddly enough, I was thinking of that scene when Sylar was helping Claire out of the building in this story. The blood lust is still there.. it's just focused in a different way.

The title picture comes from two of my favorite photos from season 2. They look gorgeous there.. damn them and their good looks.

Re: Thank you!!

[bending_sickle]

Sylar = Spike, picspam evidence.

Because it's true. *grin*