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Jan 27, 2008 19:15

Title: Define Dangerous
Characters: Sylar, Claire.
Spoilers: Up to Season 2.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2801
Chapter: 27/?
Previously: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11, Chapter 12, Chapter 13, Chapter 14, Chapter 15, Chapter 16, Chapter 17, Chapter 18, Chapter Read more... )

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karanina January 28 2008, 02:04:50 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! He can't be dead! He just can't be!

*sniff sniff*

Although, I've actually always had a theory that Ted had a natural immunity towards radiation because of his power - otherwise he would've died from it a lot sooner than when he did... die...

but NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Sylar can't die, not after he's started being semi-good!!!

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vampedvixen January 31 2008, 03:42:59 UTC
He may be dead. He may not. You'll have to read the rest to find out. ;P

Thanks for commenting. I appreciate it!

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raitheemohugger January 28 2008, 03:10:26 UTC
CRYING
BITTER TEARS
but I see that the story is not over yet....
AHA!
....
please?
I MISS SYLAR

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vampedvixen January 31 2008, 03:44:50 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! I'm sorry I made you cry.. sorry and happy.. because I'm a sadist, hehe.

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cheap_valentine January 28 2008, 04:26:01 UTC
Okay, I left my incredulous, scathing review over at fanfiction.net so I guess I should take this oppertunity to say something other than "what?", "no!", and "I hate you ( ... )

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vampedvixen January 31 2008, 03:48:04 UTC
Your comment on FF.net made me laugh. hehe.

A happy ending.. what's that? I don't understand those words. *plugs ears with fingers* lalalalala.. I'm not listening to you!

College is fun. Really. But fanfic is funner!!

And if you're worried about maybe wasting 3 months of your life, how do you think I feel.. I've been writing it ever since September ;P

Well.. I suppose you'll just have to read the last chapter so see if those three months were well worth your time and energy. Happy reading!

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stolen_kisses87 January 29 2008, 05:45:20 UTC
You kinda just broke my heart. I'm going to need for you to fix it, asap kthx. This is awesome.

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vampedvixen January 31 2008, 03:49:33 UTC
Awww.. *tapes your heart back together in a mess of duct tape, glue and safety pins* ..see, all better.. *runs away before it falls apart again and you realize how bad of a job I do fixing thing.. what do you want from me? Sylar's the one who fixes things!*

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bending_sickle January 30 2008, 18:38:38 UTC
*flail* Make things better! After everything you've put us through, you have to make things better! I don't care how! *continues to flail*

That said, Iloved the whole And now here we are planless. speech.

Typos:
despite herself and they'd just lived through -> despite herself and all they'd just lived through [or somesuch]
Claire was at a lose -> at a loss
Claire thought the word might implode in on itself -> do you mean word or world?
rocked by after shocks - aftershocks

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vampedvixen January 31 2008, 03:52:51 UTC
*flails along with you*

Boy, this is fun!

*flaps away like a birdy*

I can flyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

Thanks for this comment. I read it in class and it made me smile. And then I tried my hardest not to smile.. because I was in class.. and school is just not the place to be happy. Especially when angry teachers lurk about. hehe

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