ode to a defender

[verbigerette]

ode to a defender

2,474 words.

stephen finnan & daniel agger, alternate universe.

Hello, majority of my friends list, I greet you and potentially scare you away with this post and the possible preponderance of football-related entries in the future. But wait. Before you go, I introduce you to Stephen Finnan and Daniel Agger (collectively known as

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[leathlin]

I don't know what to write(and even if I knew I think I won't be able to write)

If perfction exists,this is it.
♥

I'm putting it into my memories(to read it any time I want to feel absolutely moved and speechles)

[verbigerette]

♥ i really don't know what to say. just, thank you!

[janierotten]

Wow. Have you written any other stuff thats posted online? Football, non football, whatever. I'm just- speechless. It's amazingly beautiful, and you can just picture it- like some beautiful artsy slow motion movie- it's just fantastic. Oh, do write S/X, do, do! Even if you feel you cant do it, trust me, if you write anything even half as good as this with them it'll be a classic. This is a classic. It's beautiful- I'll stop being repititive now, XD. But seriously, I hope we'll be seeing much, mucccch more of ya. :)
So, are you a Liverpool fan, then?

[verbigerette]

nothing else but the rants laced with metaphor, in my journal. i'm shy like that. not active at all. XD

[janierotten]

sorry for the delay in replying, been crazy busy!

rants laced with metaphors sound interesting. i love the way you write/talk. if its ok with you, maybe you should write more? wed all love that, :D.

aah, i understand that feeling completly, id write a lot more if it wasnt for that feeling...though its not s/x for me, its danny/finns (O_o). i dont ever want to ruin it, o i keep waititng till i have inspiration or something. but aww, you should definetly try, if you feel like writing it som etime. youd be great. or are you thinking of writing any other otps? kaka/sheva will so suit your style, but i guess its a question of if you like em enough to write em, no?

just saying the truth, D. or what i think anyway. arsty slowmotion films are beautiful, but im more drawn to artsy slow motion video/ advertisments. i love commercials (:-/). personal, huh? we can feel a certain degree of that in this piece, very close and passionate. ♥

YAY! me too. the boys are ♥. stupid chelsea, they played like thugs but thats a different rant altogether.

[verbigerette]

i've been busy as of late too, so apologies for the really late reply

[verbigerette]

sorry for the late reply, but thank you, for the comment! ♥ makes me want to write more. :)

[woobie]

Your writing is ohsopretty =) I loved this ♥

[verbigerette]

Thank you, and sorry for replying so late :">

[spicyasparagus]

Okay, I know this comment is really late [one month, ack!], but I stumbled upon this story a couple of weeks back, and fell head-over-heels in love with it. Your style is like poetry, and though Finns and Dagger aren't exactly the personas we're used to in real life, they fit into these ones so perfectly, like they were originally made for them. Can't say how much I adore the dialogue between these two, especially number 10 - I have a close friend who's an artist, and I love writing, so this section really speaks to me. Oh, and you researched! It's always a joy to see a story whose author has done concrete background searching on for his/her characters. X3

...I'm sorry if my comments seem over the top - hope I didn't scare you away! Please keep on writing. =]

[verbigerette]

Sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much for the lovely comment.

I can imagine these as Dan and Finns' occupations somehow, though at first i thought of making Dan a rebellious graffiti artist and Finns a policeman who tries his best to hunt him down. But i'll probably leave that for next time. :)

I like researching, i get to learn new things while writing.
And really, i'm glad you commented! :D