Teen Titans | The Geography of Trust (part 2/?)

[mandolin_minuet]

title: The Geography of Trust (2/?)
fandom; pairing: Teen Titans/DC canon; eventual Robin/Raven
rating: PG-13 for violence and potentially disturbing psychological themes
summary: The Republic is Plato's utopian vision made real, and AEGIS (synonyms: success, elite, specialized; antonyms: failure) is its very own Praetorian Guard. There are

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[straitwaistcoat]

O________O Holy crap. Holy crap. Bruce is the brain behind this thing? FDMkgnjhrefjkgfnk that man is a very bad person to have on the opposite side.

Also wtf, stop making me like Victor so muuuuch ;___; He's awesome, why

SOME OF MY FAVORITE THINGS:
The guards share a look, and it's apparently decided that the taller one is going to bite the bullet.
Little details like this about minor characters are a personal love of mine. Really fleshes out the scene and makes it feel genuine.

The other man nodded sympathetically. "Aw man, I hate it when that happens."

"Yeah," Dick replied absently, "Me too."

Remember what I just said about genuine? And what I said a few days ago about you mastering dialogue and interaction? Yeah. They both apply here too. The action in this scene ain't half bad either, but I'm not about to quote the whole thing back at you. Just know that I ♥ it and you.

Answering a question with a question was something Bruce often did when he was deliberating whether or not to actually answer the question and how much

[mandolin_minuet]

He's a brain behind something, I'll tell you that much. I didn't get to introduce other character I wanted to this time around, but I promise they'll show up in the next chapter >33

aksdj fls &hearts!! I'm glad the action wasn't all sucky; lol, it was a training round for me too. XDD

SHHH THE REPUBLIC IS A UTOPIA DON'T YOU KNOW. >3 alskjdfd *gets on next chapteeeeeeeeer*

[straitwaistcoat]

:O You tease, you terrible tease.

Hey, I didn't say any of it was sucky. xD But you're right, and it's damn difficult.

VIVE LA REVOLUTION. Write like the wiiiind

[tachyjad]

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