Good Lord this is getting bad

Nov 03, 2015 16:22

I know, I know......

If this were a movie, the shot will be in soft focus.  The ridiculously handsome man would lean in, staring intently at the supposedly plain, but really gorgeous woman with slightly messy hair, and he would huskily whisper "Please stay, I need you."  Then the music would swell, and she would kiss him and promise to stay ( Read more... )

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missdiane November 3 2015, 22:45:25 UTC
Heck, you may as well start doing a word count for NaNoWriMo by now ;)

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veritasema November 3 2015, 22:51:58 UTC
I keep hoping it will just end, But it doesn't. The words just keep building up and crashing out.

Disjointed and unconnected, but clearly part of the same story.

Hopefully it will end soon.

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motherofjedi November 4 2015, 00:01:08 UTC
If you need it to end, then may it end. You are clearly a talented writer because these vignettes pull me in and the word ride is really enjoyable. What stops me from writing--putting insights together, putting in effort to make them work--is that it feels like sitting in dirty bathwater. Once the thoughts are out, I'm done with them, I don't want to wallow in them any more.

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veritasema November 4 2015, 00:30:37 UTC
Oh Mojo...you have no idea how little control I gave over my mind.

It doesn't listen to me. Usually I let it do its thing, because otherwise it gets like an ornery horse and just gallops away without me.

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