Leftover fic piece

Dec 02, 2015 13:09

Because it was necessary, I gave the previously unnamed hero a name......I don't think its really his name, but I was running out of descriptive words in my head.

So, he is now Nat.  With Nina it doesn't work, so suggestions welcome, it was more for my covenience than anything.

Talking in public was always problematic for Nina.  She either was ( Read more... )

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motherofjedi December 3 2015, 15:12:38 UTC
'nat' seems a too insignificant name for him (gnat).
Nate is better, but really I don't know the character well enough to say. Rodolfo was my first thought, however, for his dark and unreadable face. //^_^\\

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veritasema December 3 2015, 18:29:28 UTC
Rodolfo! Mojo, you romantic.

I really suck at names for characters. I can see the people, when they pop into my head, but their names are always secondary to me.

Sure, he can be Rodolfo.....why not?

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motherofjedi December 3 2015, 20:24:00 UTC
eh, a name like Rodolfo comes with a lot of baggage, a lot of expectations thrown in the reader's head. but if your character is a smoldering latino type, go for it!
then again I'm merely exposing my WASP expectations when I compare Rodolfo to a "neutral" name like Nate.....
perhaps the TV ad for Telenovela has addled my brain. Sometimes I wonder if we could have any stories at all without stereotypes. Certainly we could have no comedy without them.

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