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[verlieren]

It is a river color

Comments

[subtexts]

i love the roundness of the last two words and how it ties up the entirety of the poem so elegantly

[manprasad]

Man, is that yours? That's really good--reminds me of Dylan Thomas.

[chas_hamrick]

hmmm

[chas_hamrick]

what happened to your earlier entrie i didnt get to see

[ladymeat]

is this yours? if so, you are great

Yes it is mine and,

[verlieren]

Thanks. I really appreciate it.