Comments | vermin_disciple: For the Birds

vermin_disciple

For the Birds

Jun 06, 2010 19:49

Fandom Slings and Arrows
Characters: Anna, Darren
Rating: G
Word Count: 300
Notes: Written for ds_snippets, for the prompt, ‘flamingo.’ Because I am inordinately fond of that prompt.
Summary: In which Anna is bearer of bad news.

( It was Monday, and Darren was being exasperating. )

!my fic: slings and arrows, !my fic

Comments 16

a_t_rain June 7 2010, 12:40:08 UTC

Brilliant! Especially the Titus Andronicus line.

vermin_disciple June 12 2010, 01:20:41 UTC

I'd like to see what Darren would do with that play.

Thank you! :D

brigantine June 7 2010, 16:20:28 UTC

*cracks up*

Fabulous! Anna so deserves extra Timbits when dealing with Darren. ;)

vermin_disciple June 12 2010, 01:22:07 UTC

And possibly a raise. :D

Thank you!

mizface June 17 2010, 01:43:26 UTC

This was terrific, start to finish. Your Anna and Darren are spot on! And this line especially made me smile:

Anna could not, but felt that if there was a child in this conversation, it wasn’t her.

I have a feeling she thinks that a LOT and not just when dealing with Darren.

Thanks for sharing!

vermin_disciple June 17 2010, 06:41:02 UTC

Oh yes. Poor Anna, she must feel like a babysitter, sometimes.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)