Tacenda [Got7]

[verocity]

Title: Tacenda [Chapter 2]
Main Character: Jaebum
Warnings: -none-
Rating: G
Word Count: 2,246
Summary: This is a story about things that should not be said.
Notes: New fandom, new writing style~ Thanks to Jess for the sudden beta request! ♥

Comments

[ivyfuture]

Ok I'm a shadow reader but I gotta say I really really like this writing style!! It's so interesting and I can't wait to see how the rest of the story goes! I'm really anticipating it. Your writing is very clean and I like how the plot is still somewhat of a mystery to me. The developments being from JB's point of view put a really interesting view on the story, so keep it up! Keep writing :)

[verocity]

Thank you for reading and commenting! TBH I like writing in this style as well, it's a lot more challenging than my previous style but it's definitely more rewarding~

The plot is really starting to pick up by now, and we'll likely hit full pace by next chapter. JB is going to be very busy ^^

[anonymous]

Wow I really had amazing timing! LOL. I feel like I just read an entirely different story this time. Are you gonna be showing JB's different sides of being a leader in a number of situations? Why the sudden JJP distance :\ go away, Mark. Still love JB/Bambam thing going on lmao. Plus Jackson is totally nosy lmao. thanks for the read!

-rf

[verocity]

Haha yeah, the story is going to transform quickly once the plots I have start appearing. I'd rather not put spoilers here, though, but yeah we're going to see different sides of JB. And Mark is... being a good friend, let's put it that way ^^ And Bambam is just all kinds of adorable. Jackson though, I just- /sighs at Jackson.

Thanks for reading and commenting! I hope to have the next chapter up soon~

[youngjaeyah]

Ahhr, I wanted to comment last night right after you uploaded it but I wasn't sure if I would steal someone's spot or something (ahah still new to livejournal, kinda orz) Anyyywayyy

[verocity]

Thank you! For reading and for the lovely comment

[xfragments]

omg so happy you updated. I love this story so much. I keep trying to figure out if there's a underlying pairing of jb/jr (please let there be hehe). I think you write jb and jr extremely accurately even though we don't really know them super well yet.

[verocity]

Hehe thank you! I love Jaebum as a character, and I think that (for me) so far he's a good example of an idol that goes beyond just singing and dancing, he's also displaying attitudes as a leader that I approve of strongly.

As for underlying pairings... I guess we'll see ^^

[quotidianue]

AHHHHHHH I kid you not I think I screamed a little when I saw you had updated

I'm really loving how you're writing JB - he seems to have aspects of that somewhat put-together persona we see in got7's variety shows, but there's an underlay of panic and confusion that gives him some more ~realistic and human~ qualities.

Jackson, too- he has a high observance skill and is attuned to how people respond around him, yet also has a very spontaneous side that gets a bit crazy and out of hand; not always allowing for him to say and do things that ///best/// suit the situation

overall, I'm sO ENTHRALLED BY YOUR FIC and i can't wait until the next update! ;v;

[verocity]

Thank you~ I love writing group leaders and I think Jaebum here is currently the character that I've put most effort into. He's shown so many interesting qualities in their variety shows and we keep learning so much more about him. ^^

And Jackson oh dear. Haha yeah, it's easy to see him as basically just a goofball. But by looking deeper we can also see that he's so much more, that he also has the group's welfare in mind. He's... hard to write but also a very interesting character to explore.

Thank you for enjoying this chapter, I'll do my best on the next one as well ^^

[quotidianue]

You're welcome~

Yes, exactly right! I think one of the most interesting parts of being a fanfiction reader is that you get to see how the same people can be interpreted different by different authors;; and so far I think your characterisation of both jb and jackson are so ON POINT it's almost terrifying

!! aaa, I'll be looking forward to future installments <3 I'm so insanely curious about what's gonna happen next aye