Virtual Reality 1/? [Uruha/Aoi]

Feb 21, 2013 00:03

Title: Virtual Reality
Chapters: 1/?
Author: Veroxion
Beta: DeadlyScarlet
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Homophobia, Sexual Scenes, Use of Real Names + OC's
Pairings: Uruha/Aoi

Synopsis: An online love could never flourish. That's what Yuu believes when he meets Kouyou over the Internet, finding a friend in him when he's the school outcast for ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pairing: uruha/aoi, fic: virtual reality

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veroxion February 21 2013, 03:50:44 UTC
Thank you. :3 I didn't want this to be too long, but it felt short as a oneshot and what I planned wouldn't fit lol.

I hope to update this regularly, so another update should be on it's way soon. Thanks for commenting, sweetie. :)

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deadlyscarlet February 20 2013, 12:41:53 UTC
Comment time :) And I'm already sure you know my feelings towards this. But let me give a proper comment filled with all my emotions when i first read this ( ... )

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veroxion February 21 2013, 04:02:45 UTC
Aw sweetie, your comment made me smile. I feel so proud that you like this story so much. I really do. ; A ;

Yuu is rather tough here. He just knows that there's something better waiting for him out there, and he knows he won't have to put up with his current lifestyle for much longer if all goes to plan. So he's hopeful that things will change.

That's how I tried to write Kouyou. XD He's growing into an adult, but he still has some childish behavior in him. I'm going to really enjoy writing him in future chapters. Aw, I think so too. He will definitely do well in healing Yuu. :')

You're welcome! Thanks so much for agreeing. I love and value your opinion a lot, and you helped me out a lot with the synopsis too. I'm so grateful for that haha. Hopefully I can get the next chapter to you soon, you know I've already started writing it. *hugs* ♥

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xadowangel February 20 2013, 13:59:54 UTC
I WANT THE FIRST SPOT!!!! *KICKS AROUND*

OKAY OKAY THIS WAS LOVELY, WELL I KNOW YOU ALREADY KNOW THAT ^^

Yuu's character here is really good. A simple school guy making friends(!) online, with parents like that. It's not easy to describe a typical boy's typical life, but you did just that and I could almost see everything you said. Even though we don't know much about kouyou right now, I'm sure it's gonna be a surprise ^^ (I love surprises)

I couldn't believe my eyes when I logged in! I didn't know you're gonna update so soon! If I did i'd have fought for the spot bad >< I keep missing the spots these days. Damn internet.

I love this and you know it!!! Looking forward for more!!!

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veroxion February 21 2013, 04:07:04 UTC
You need to be quicker to get it next time then. :P

I'm surrounded by boys lol. I think that's how I managed to pull off writing Yuu as a typical boy. XD My brothers have rubbed off me, because I swear I act like a guy sometimes as well. =__=" But thank you! This made me smile. I'm happy I could capture his personality well. Yes, Kouyou is a bit mysterious right now since this is mainly from Yuu's point of view, but I'm sure you'll love him as the story progresses. ;)

Gosh I know. I didn't expect to update so much! First CTS, then this chapter. And Miai will be updated soon too, since I've finished the next chapter and it's currently in the hands of my beta. I feel so good that I've managed to update so much!

Thanks for commenting sweetie! ♥ I hope to update this fic soon. *hugs*

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alexataylorone February 20 2013, 16:31:35 UTC
Wow, this is very interesting. I feel bad for Yuu in this and it makes me want to be able to trust Kouyou, but we still don't know too much about him yet. I do hope to learn more about Kouyou while things hopefully get better for Yuu. Please update soon :)

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veroxion February 21 2013, 04:08:47 UTC
Thank you very much. (^^) So far, Kouyou is a bit mysterious since this is all from Yuu's point of view. I hope with the future chapters you'll be able to trust him a little bit more and get to know him better through Yuu's eyes.

I'll do my best to update soon! Thanks for commenting dear. ♥

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veroxion February 21 2013, 04:10:03 UTC
Yuu's life is a bit difficult for him now, but he's hopeful it will change soon... and I'm sure Kouyou will be able to help him in some way too. ;)

Thank you! I really like this idea as well, so I hope you enjoy what I have planned. (^^) Thank you for commenting! I really appreciate it. ♥

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