Virtual Reality 1/? [Uruha/Aoi]

[veroxion]

Title: Virtual Reality
Chapters: 1/?
Author: Veroxion
Beta: DeadlyScarlet
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Homophobia, Sexual Scenes, Use of Real Names + OC's
Pairings: Uruha/Aoi

Synopsis: An online love could never flourish. That's what Yuu believes when he meets Kouyou over the Internet, finding a friend in him when he's the school outcast for

Comments

[internetjockey]

this is so sad! yuu's mom is so mean.....i hope nothing serious happens to his head though....

[veroxion]

She is a little bit. :( I think his head will be fine, don't worry.

Thanks for commenting!

[sewa_n_kai]

its an interesting read.

looking forward to the next chapter =)

[veroxion]

Thank you very much. :) I hope you enjoy the next chapter too!

[n3uromanc3r]

I was a little bit worried it will be a chat-fic or something, but reading this first chapter was a really nice surprise, I like it so far!

I wonder what Kouyou feels for Yuu, and I'm really curious how will they meet when the summary said there will be a mistake in Yuu's plans to run away to Tokyo...

And I liked the scene when Yuu's mother came with the first aid kit, I know how Yuu sees his parents but the mother's clumsy attempt to behave like a real mother for once was somehow touching.

And I like the older, more mature Kouyou-concept so much!

There will be a Miai-update soon? Such a nice surprise, I like all your stories I started to read till now but I have to admit it that one is closest to my heart!

[veroxion]

I know what you mean. ^^" Reading in that particular style can be quite tedious, I understand. So I'm happy this was a surprise for you and you like it. :3

You'll have to wait and see~ His mother tries, I guess she just doesn't really try enough.

I do as well, though for some reason I find it difficult to come up with good plots for him? I'm happy I managed to write this. I'm really pleased with his character here. Even though I like him being more mature, Uruha is depicted in a lot of fics as well... not.

Well, I'm hoping there will be a Miai update soon. The chapter is finished, and my beta is currently going over it. Though she's quite busy, and I'm not rushing her so we'll see. :) Thank you! I'm happy I get to finally update it after such a long time. It has a special place in my heart, that fic. I missed writing it so much.

[delusive_doll]

Ta-daaa, I could not just not leave a comment after our talk lol
This is such a promising start! Love Yuu's character here; I like him being so vulnerable and in need of someone to take care of him. It would be too simple if he just meets Uruha and everything goes smooth. Since you've mentioned that "everything falls to pieces", I guess I can look forward to a lot of drama (and I love it!
It would be really good if you can update this anytime soon, I'm dying from curiosity ><

[veroxion]

Aw, thank you! :3

You know, I'm starting to like a more vulnerable Aoi/Yuu these days as well. I have no idea where it's coming from. XD

You might be surprised. ;) This won't be very long. I intended for it to be a oneshot (I laugh at myself and awful estimates) but it'll probably be around five chapters or so. So you never know what will happen~

I've actually just finished the next chapter, and I'm editing it now. Hopefully my beta will be able to have it soon. Thanks for commenting!! :D