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Psycho, Psycho 1/1 [Aoi/Uruha]

Mar 24, 2012 03:44

Title: Psycho, Psycho
Chapters: 1/1 (Oneshot)
Author: veroxion
Beta: n/a
Genre: Horror/Romance
Rating: R
Warnings: Stalking, Self-harm
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha

Synopsis: I'm gonna write you a letter, coloured in red.

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fanfiction, fic: psycho psycho, pairing: aoi/uruha

Comments 28

ext_1048341 March 24 2012, 09:11:58 UTC

Wow this was awesome...u have actually depicted a psychopath's thoughts very well..it seemed so real...I m just gonna assume tat Uruha was totally shocked and tries running away frm Aoi and somehow the get together coz even though i love tragedies i want tis to b a happy one..but anyway nice job..i really love ur style of writing...

veroxion March 24 2012, 12:11:39 UTC

Thank you so much, dear! I have a thing for psychological disorders, to be perfectly honest. It's a strange fascination, but if I can depict Aoi's thoughts in this well enough that it's clear he's even a bit psycho, then I thank you greatly!

Really, I appreciate your comment. It motivates me to write more, and I do especially enjoy your comments in general.

Aw, I feel the same way about tragedies. Maybe that's why, in my mind, Uruha went to Aoi. But I would honestly be freaked out if anything like that happened to me.

Once again, thanks so much for reading and commenting! It's such a compliment when you say you like my style of writing ^__^/

ext_1048341 March 24 2012, 15:56:38 UTC

u r welcome ^^ i can understand ur fascination..i hate to admit this but u c i kinda hav a unbalanced side too..when things go beyond control i do hav tis tedency to draw blood...well its been years since i last did it though..i dont want it to happen again...but at times like this the person needs love..tats y i wud love to assume Uruha went after Aoi...and i m glad i made u happy with my comment...and its true dear u hav a unique writing style..i hope to read more of ur works in the future...

veroxion March 24 2012, 16:04:54 UTC

Ah, I understand completely! I've had my fair share of hard times, but it's good you have enough control to stop doing things like that. I'm definitely here if you ever want to talk <3

Mmm, exactly. Aoi's character in this... He's head over heels, but he can't express it properly. He's just very confused, and he doesn't really know how to interact with people. He thinks what's he's doing is a sign of how strong his love is.

Honestly, I didn't mention Uruha's character a lot in this, though I tried to hint at it. Bur really, Uruha is lonely as well. And Aoi knows that, and is trying to comfort him from afar. In my mind, Uruha definitely goes to Aoi, for the general fear that someone is ending their life over him... even if he is freaked, I think he would do that at least.

Still, thank you so much! It's great that I receive this support from you. I hope you continue to like and read my works! I think you'll enjoy the fics I currently have planned :)

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veroxion March 24 2012, 14:45:38 UTC

LOL. Everyone seems to think Uruha's gonna run away screaming. I guess I didn't portray much of his character in this... Now I'm tempted to write a sequel and show it >:l

Hearing that this fic is beautiful never fails to make me feel proud. So thank you, so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it greatly! <3

queenofyay March 25 2012, 12:33:38 UTC

Ooh...I like it. Very..emotional! Mysterious!

Wow I hope Uru went to Aoi! I think he'd be scared..but I wouldn't imagine he'd let Aoi die even if he was stalking him.
So that's how I shall imagine it!

veroxion March 25 2012, 13:12:52 UTC

I don't think Uruha would let Aoi die, either ^_^

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, darling! <3 I'm glad you liked it.

aoinoringo March 25 2012, 13:59:20 UTC

OMG!! I just read my lj and BAM! I read this.. This is freaking awesome!! Dude, it's so beautiful.. And I cried.. T_T
Sometimes, people will feel 'I love you so much I can die' and do anything to make it better.. It's scary but so beautiful..

Well, once again I think I find my favorite author.. Keep writing! :)

veroxion March 26 2012, 03:16:23 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! Sorry for making you cry... That wasn't my intention ~ *give tissue*

Yeah, exactly. Though I think what Aoi did was a way of trying to see if Uruha cared for him at all. He was getting a bit desperate :c

I'll definitely keep writing! Thanks for your lovely comments, sweetheart <3