Distress and Coma 2.5/3 [Aoi/Uruha]

Apr 12, 2012 06:46

Title: Distress and Coma
Chapters: 2.5/3
Author: veroxion
Beta: blackjack_bitch
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Masturbation, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha, Reita/Ruki (hints)

Synopsis: He had never felt so estranged from their friendship before, but now... him and Aoi felt like strangers, and it tore Uruha apart piece by piece inside.

Comments: I actually ( Read more... )

fic: distress and coma, fanfiction, pairing: aoi/uruha

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phillipthefrog April 11 2012, 20:19:11 UTC
You posted!!!!!!!!!!!

Do I get a treat for knowing that it was a fantasy?? Please? Pleaseeeeeeee

It's really detailed. I think my pulse quickened when I was reading it *-*

very, very

sexy

I wonder how he can look at Aoi and not feel embarrassed for having such fantasies. And the fact that he said that he loved him all alone and to no one is really sad. >.>

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veroxion April 11 2012, 20:30:56 UTC
LOL. Well, ok. You get a treat, I suppose *showers you with treats galore*

Aha, well I hope it did. It was kinda supposed to :P

Yeah. Poor Uruha. It was kinda hard writing that scene. Maybe some things will be cleared up next chapter ~ when it comes out :D

Thanks for commenting, sweetie ~

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phillipthefrog April 11 2012, 21:03:55 UTC
YAYYYY!!!

You besta be writing it *glowers at you*

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veroxion April 11 2012, 21:11:35 UTC
I AM WRITING IT...


... )

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anonymous April 11 2012, 22:41:38 UTC
I hope soon, means soon cause this... this is intense, lol. I love it.

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hellionx609 April 11 2012, 22:42:55 UTC
I hope soon, means soon cause this... this is intense, lol. I love it.

PS. Ignore my accidentally anonymous comment....

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veroxion April 12 2012, 09:43:41 UTC
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed! It was fun writing, even though it was sad and emotional at the end.

And it's fine! You're not the first person to comment anonymously by accident, and I'm sure you won't be the last ^^

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hellionx609 April 14 2012, 01:33:48 UTC
Yeah, poor Uruha. Not as bad as some of the things I do to him though. God, I must be a horrible person. I've burned him alive, tortured him to the extent of burning his eye out with a cigarette and god knows what Aoi will do to him next in Resistance, lol.

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veroxion April 14 2012, 03:01:49 UTC
You're the evil character torturer, lol. I can be cruel to characters, but I haven't really gotten any current fanfiction that really tortures them. Well, maybe Sanguine Love. I think I torture my characters mentally instead of physically ^^

I dread to think what plans Aoi has for him...

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confusion_hime April 11 2012, 23:25:22 UTC
Oh my god.

That was so hot.

Like so fucking hot.

I don't usually read smut in the office since we all know that entails consequences but I just had to ignore the 'not worksafe' warnings that rang in my head and allowed myself to enjoy this chapter.

That was so hot.

I have no words.

It was just sldkfjsklfjskljfkljdklsjfkljfkjlfjklsjfklj

I died.

I DIED.

And yes, right now, I can't come up with an appropriate comment because my mind is swimming and all I can think about is how sexy Uruha is in this chapter and how fucking drool-worthy Aoi is. MORE! MORE smut! LOL.

skdfjsldfjskljfksjdfdjsfljkjklfjlfj

I know you're having writer's block right now but I hope you will update soon. I'll patiently wait, my friend. :D

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veroxion April 12 2012, 09:49:08 UTC
YOUR COMMENT MADE ME LAUGH SO MUCH. You're naughty, reading stuff at work... then again, I'd probably be guilty of the same thing. No one can resist Aoiha smut 8D

Ahh, but thank you!! There's smut in the next chapter. And it's real this time, lol. So, um, that's something to look forward to when it comes?! I'm whining about writer's block now, but something will kick my muse into place and it'll be written eventually. Just depends on when the kicking occurs.

SJFDSGDFGH. Thank you for leaving me such a lovely comment ;__; I'll try so hard to make the next chapter worth the wait, if there is one! <3

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confusion_hime April 14 2012, 11:46:44 UTC
LOL. And it doesn't help that I'm addicted to Aoiha smut. Fuck work! *evil laugh*

Hurray for smut! I'm so glad Aoi and Uruha won't be disappointed next time, neh? Anyways, I'll cross my fingers and hope inspiration will come to you once again so you can finally whip up the last chapter. :) I'll patiently wait.

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veroxion April 14 2012, 21:37:21 UTC
It probably won't be too explicit like the stuff I wrote for Conquest, but it'll be good! I promise ~ <3

I don't know about this either, but I was thinking of maybe writing a sequel to it as well... except, the sequel would have Reita/Ruki as the main couple. I don't know, I just had this scene in my head... I fall in love with my characters too quickly, and it feels a bit sad that I have to leave them when the next chapter is posted. Plus this is my first GazettE fanfic, so it's a bit special. Hmm...

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lady_sb April 12 2012, 01:05:46 UTC
Can't wait to read what happens next! Thanks for the interlude

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veroxion April 12 2012, 09:49:54 UTC
You are most welcome! I hope it was satisfying and the next chapter is equally so as well <3

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