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[verruka]

"You'll meet in college," Lucy says thoughtfully. She crosses and uncrosses her pink-and-black-striped legs and I notice a small hole in the left knee of her stockings. 
    "Oh?"
    "Not at the same college mind you. She'll be an Ivy Leaguer, and you'll be doing some gig at her school…"
    "I'm still in a band at this point?" 
    "Duh! So

Comments

[sainterre]

I love that first excerpt. Looove it. The other one I'm not sure I really understand, and that's probably because I don't have any of the background for it. Keep writing! And hopefully posting more excerpts. I like reading it.

Also, if you ever want someone to look over grammar and such, let me know. I love grammar. *geek*

[theonlyink]

I like them both but the first one is awesome.
Reminds me of this girl who also writes awesome stuff.