Maybe the dialogue is a bit too casual... no, that's not the right word. I mean to say that the words repeat a lot, like there's too much ''sure'' and ''yeah'' in the following exchanges; my English teacher always tells me not to use the same words all the time and substitute better words in order to make a stronger sentence structure. (There's those certain ''dead words''.)
But other thant that, I don't think this chapter sucks. Can't wait till the next one!
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Maybe the dialogue is a bit too casual... no, that's not the right word. I mean to say that the words repeat a lot, like there's too much ''sure'' and ''yeah'' in the following exchanges; my English teacher always tells me not to use the same words all the time and substitute better words in order to make a stronger sentence structure. (There's those certain ''dead words''.)
But other thant that, I don't think this chapter sucks. Can't wait till the next one!
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