CWW- Chapter 2

[veruslux]

Last chapter i've got of this one.

Tried to get a Command Style in there, I hope it worked.

Also, OHMYGOD I am SO PROUD of Gen. He just ended up fitting in here SO WELL. Expect much quoting of the Odyssey.

Oh, note: the 'oddly-shaped helmet' is the one in Crisis Core that the Genesis copies wear.

Comments

[myrrh_darkwing]

Ooooh, yay, The Odyssey! I love that epic! So naturally Genesis wins for quoting it (even if I have no idea who the heck he is- medomai's teaching me about BBS, I swear!). Zombie!Zack is neat too (again with the not knowing).

Concrit:

- Again, MOAR EXPLANATION PLZ!!! How did the Nobodies run into Terra? Why are they at the Coliseum?

Right then, I can't write for most of these characters to save my life, but they don't SEEM OOC. Nice fic- just explain why what's happening is happening.

[veruslux]

Again, thank you SO MUCH for reading these.

But, you should probably go allll the way back and start at chapter one of a second twilight. everything makes more sense that way :)

[myrrh_darkwing]

Hey, nothing better to do. This thing they call goodfic is weird indeed.

Oh, now she tells me. Fiiiiine XD

[veruslux]

Hahaha, whoops, I should put a disclaimer, shouldn't I? xD