[E-Mail] To Mary, Tom.
To: mgodwin@meridian.edu
Subject: Your story.
Date: May XX 2010
From: jgrimm@meridian.edu
Attachments: Victoria Critique.doc
Mary,
I'm sorry it took so long to respond. Thank you for sharing your story with me. I was finally able to finish reading it. Overall I found it very compelling. Your style is raw and vivid, and the way you weave the tale is gripping and flows well.
I've included a document with some of my own suggestions. I can't guarantee that they will be very coherent, but if you have any questions or need clarification, let me know. As with all literary critique, take it with a grain of salt and only apply what you feel would be fitting.
Regards,
Jake
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To: teliot@meridian.edu
Subject: Organizations.
Date: May XX 2010
From: jgrimm@meridian.edu
Attachments: Campus Orgs.doc
Tom,
Attached you'll find a list and descriptions of campus organizations that may be able to offer you help, as well as the names and numbers of people you should contact in them. I've already spoken to everyone listed and you should be treated with respect and kindness. Let me know if you aren't. The year is coming to a close rapidly, but you should be able to at least touch base with some of these organizations and gain a support network that can assist you over the summer.
-J
Subject: Your story.
Date: May XX 2010
From: jgrimm@meridian.edu
Attachments: Victoria Critique.doc
Mary,
I'm sorry it took so long to respond. Thank you for sharing your story with me. I was finally able to finish reading it. Overall I found it very compelling. Your style is raw and vivid, and the way you weave the tale is gripping and flows well.
I've included a document with some of my own suggestions. I can't guarantee that they will be very coherent, but if you have any questions or need clarification, let me know. As with all literary critique, take it with a grain of salt and only apply what you feel would be fitting.
Regards,
Jake
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To: teliot@meridian.edu
Subject: Organizations.
Date: May XX 2010
From: jgrimm@meridian.edu
Attachments: Campus Orgs.doc
Tom,
Attached you'll find a list and descriptions of campus organizations that may be able to offer you help, as well as the names and numbers of people you should contact in them. I've already spoken to everyone listed and you should be treated with respect and kindness. Let me know if you aren't. The year is coming to a close rapidly, but you should be able to at least touch base with some of these organizations and gain a support network that can assist you over the summer.
-J