TM Topic #207: Control (application)

[veryneatmonster]

“See, here he was in control,” Dexter said, making one clean slice with his imaginary knife. “The splatter is controlled, minimal and the pooling is denser.” He pointed the brownish red stain on the carpet that would forever hold the memory of this event

Comments

[detmike_logan]

OOC: I read over your entries and I really like what you're doing. I've read the Dexterbooks - before I saw the show - and I think you have a good handle on the voice. Nice job!

[veryneatmonster]

Thank you so much! It means a lot to me!I've seen s1 of the series but primarily I work off the books because I think you get a much stronger sense of his voice in them.