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Residue from Last Night (1/2)

Jun 11, 2011 17:15

Title: Residue from Last Night (1/2)
Author: veryspecial0ne
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~2500
Disclaimer: Nothing has ever been less mine than Community.
Spoilers: Through the end of Season 2.
Summary: He pounds on the door and calls out "Annie, it's Jeff," because freaking her out by knocking unexpectedly the day after someone tried to break in is the ( Read more... )

fanfiction, community, residue from last night

Comments 25

ndnickerson June 12 2011, 03:46:23 UTC

i love all the perfectly specific canon details, and their voices are spot-on. can't wait to see what happens in the last half. =)

veryspecial0ne June 12 2011, 21:31:38 UTC

Thanks for reviewing! The last half is incoming, hopefully soon.

ellashy June 12 2011, 04:43:03 UTC

I love domestic Jeff and Annie!! so keep it coming hehe

veryspecial0ne June 12 2011, 21:32:26 UTC

You got it! I have bits and pieces of the second half written and they just need to be ties together, so hopefully it won't take long. The reviews definitely help motivate me!

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veryspecial0ne June 12 2011, 21:34:08 UTC

Yup, I like to think it's totally "Jeff" to jump in when he perceives a threat to Annie (he's the same way with Abed, usually) but inviting someone into your personal space for a whole night is a whoooole different story.

wallows June 12 2011, 13:46:45 UTC

This is so scrumptiously good. I laughed so much at the cyclops debate for far longer than is appropriate, I think. And the remark about half of her is boob.
This story hummed along so perfectly, I was thinking I hope she just writes more before I'd even finished reading.
The convo about Britta and the subsequent reveal of why Annie was asking is so funny. Everyone voice is so in character, yet you take it somewhere new. Annie is so great here, self assured with all her quirks.
I loved all the details: Annie's study habits and the sink, good god, the sink! So charged yet so domestic. You make flossing ust-y! Eagerly awaiting next part.

veryspecial0ne June 12 2011, 21:35:10 UTC

Believe it or not, the Cyclops debate is lifted from a conversation I had with my long-distance-pseudo-ex-boyfriend, haha. Thanks so much for R/R-ing, glad you're liking it!

eva_aftagrl June 13 2011, 03:50:05 UTC

Finally catching up on reding fanfic, and this one is FTW, can't wait to read more!

veryspecial0ne June 14 2011, 03:30:30 UTC

Thank you! Second half is on its way, hopefully in the next day or so.